Spiked Tears: Preview (Draft 1)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, May 17, 2012.

  1. Haha :) the helpless girl that wants friends xD
     
  2. As Bryn unwrinkled the wrinkles that Kaye's from Aviela's embrace, she stared puzzled at me, "Do you mind if I talk to the young ones, telling that I'm gonna take a break off teaching?"
    I yawned, loathsome, "Knock yourself out." I heard Bryns heels clatter to the hall as she waved to some other professors. Then I got up, stretched, and went to see what Whit and Aviela were doing. As I went to the waiting room where the dead man was bring dragged away by the force, being a pain since the corpse was too heavy for the policemen to load the body into the fringed wagon. As a young beginner struggled against the dead body, I pushed him aside, carrying the man's duty, and loading him into the truck with no ease, as the young policeman without a word, had his mouth hanging open, and I walked over there, touched his scruffy chin, closed his mouth shut, petted him head, and walked back to Whit and Aviela, making sure the boy would keep it a secret.
     
  3. Whit festered his hands while Aviela touched the fingertips, causing him to freeze, knowing what situation it was.
    "She's a romantic all right."I said whispering as I crouched down, trying to see the evidence of the moment.
    Aviela blushed, obviously,"Thanks a million again, for saving me, it's the kindest gesture any person has done for me...." she lurked off. Whit laughed, playfully,"Ah, no sweat. It's what I do, save a lady in distress."
    Aviela giggled wholly as she whispered something in Whits ear that I could not sink that made Whit curl his lips, causing his teeth to impress.
     
  4. Awwwwwwwwwww 
     
  5. I rolled my eyes so fondly, I thought my eyes were gonna roll of my face. As Whit and Aviela were deprecated, Bryn came out feverish, looking like a pack mule had just rode on her in the desert. Bryn said slowly,"I'm free for the week, so what do you guys need here?"her voice cracked. I said, firmly, "Well, we went here to pick up you, but I don't think a tour around the place would be much harm, would it?"I nodded my head. She chuckled, pleased with the response,"Right this way."she gestured her hand to the hallway which the Artifacts of Memorable History was founded. I never really noticed the place was this organized, ever since I came around.
     
  6. Bump 
     
  7. As I traced my hands along the bookshelf that cornered and wrapped around the library, the world fell upon me, and my eyes started to shutter, making me droop into a deep commendation. I found myself in s place where my fondest memories, they flickered, making me wonder where I was.

    "Who's there, answer me!",I shook as my hands enleased a dagger that made me hold it with my left hand, which was the best defense in my strategies, and my right hand feeling the top of my forehead, lightly slapping the cheek, making sure I was just dreaming in a foreign land, and making sure I didn't have a fever from a cold as I battled the tests, making sure I wasn't having any hallucinations if a tear actually got mr injured. As I forested hazily through the mist of fond and distant memories, I saw a flash, a bright, encasing one, when make my eyes gaze and behold what was there, on for a few seconds.
     
  8. The flash conceded a tall,incredibly, alluring white tiger that eyed me lusciously. I pondered.

    "I never saw you in my life before....", my voice escaping from my lungs.

    The infinite tiger roared, it's smoldering evergreen eyes yawning in laziness, probably thinking I wasn't a threat, just a minor cause. I rolled my eyes at its response.
    Then fire thrashed near the tiger, causing it to roar, sending sonic waves beaming and thrashing my head open, making me howl in disgust and agony. It jumped out of the memory at me, causing me to widens eyes, ready to unleash my dagger at it. I felt a drowning sensation, feeling as if my life was at rest. When at a final turn, thankfully, the real world blundered and smacked my into realization that I had been staring at Aviela for an increasingly long time, in my fade.
     
  9. "Um......are ok sick?", she asked puzzled.
    "Yeah it's all cool, I just got into those....those...those....",i repeated.
    "Those, what?", Aviela asked, straightforward and clear. God I hate this girl.
    "Those....", I gazed around, trying to find an exuse, I found a pillow with a small fragile baby, playing with the sun that nested near stars that were embroider in the pillow.
    "Those star dreams.", I said calmly, thinking that it was the best exuse, so I felt relaxed.
    Whit sighed nervously, putting his face on his palms, knowing that I just said one of the most stupidest things to a person that he was fond of. An epic fail to be exact, but that's just me. I grinned happily at the gesture.
     
  10. This is a great story! You're a great writer, really good plot :)!
     
  11.  sky sky
     
  12. Then my eyes were blinded. Whats disturbing me, what does this thing want from me? Am I a threat? I had a million questions to enroll, but my words didn't come outta my mouth, I was paralyzed. Then suddenly, near the bookshelf at the end corner, showed a face, covered in silhouette form, since that area was covered, my jaw dropped. The form had the same intense, evergreen eyes, staring at me. I shivered, afraid if I was still the dream, steaming in my mind. Was that place a dream, or something else?
     
  13. I remembered those eyes from somewhere else! My mind raced, unaware that my friends, well except for the girl, we're staring at me, thinking I was some foreign thing or something.
    "That girl, that girl....", I shuddered, pointing at the corner where those fascinating eyes caught my scent.
    Bryn startled,"S, you ok?"
    "This means....", I trailed off.
    Then I pounced on a bookshelf, causing the massive, thick carriages to plop and blunder all on its own, causing a few to hit on Whit. I scrambled through a few books and gasped as I sunk my nails into the cover of a book, thick as a skyscraper: The book of Everlasting Mysteries.
     
  14. As I flipped through pages, Bryn was trying to shove me off my feet.
    She yelled, alarmed,"Sacoto, stop! This is not the time for books, you made a huge collision!"
    I murmured and hummed nervously going through pages, flipping around, until I saw that chapter, the chapter of The Creatures of Beyond. Some legends say that there are others creatures around, but no one has ever proved it, causing it to be a myth. But that can't be true, in a page with a amazing, detailing picture of a bounding tiger, one of the "lost creatures". If I'm not dreaming, would the legends be true, do we have other creatures beside us, and how did that tiger get into my mind?
     
  15.  satgr!
     
  16. "For the last time, I'm not a tack",Whit sweared, which didn't occur often.
    Tears awoken on my face, streaming and gleaming of the craved lights on the place, trying to surface indulgence. I cradled myself back and forth, unafraid and afraid of what everyone had though of me.
     
  17. Aviela scooted," Well then, that was an unfortunate term of events.

    Whit coughed, signaling me to move on.

    "Oh! Yeah, um where were we?",I asked calmly.

    Bryn just rolled her eyes and trotted off to the end of the hall, with everyone else following her
     
  18. As I explored the magnificent carvings, paintings, statues, etc, I suddently noticed something so inevitable, my eyes cornered every little space that contained it.
    Lying there was a little girl, maybe 9, with one eye as blue as the roaring seas, and green as the everlasting emerald, studying her novel of training intently.
     
  19. She peered with sudden caution,
    "Are you the superintendent that's new around here?"she said bash fully.
    I frowned, smiling, but just a peek,
    "No little girl, I'm just an old student here."
    She nodded politely,"Why are you here if I may ask?"
    Her eyes gazed, sparkled on the lights, causing little beams of light to appear.
    I sighed, hesitant,"Well, we just came here to pick up your teacher, that's all. She needed a break."
    She nodded with curiousness,"
    Oh really, she said she would help me with my strategy guide, I'm a beginner, so I don't do much around here, just read of knowledge."
     
  20. (your first comment from me )
    fantabuloso (the eyes are stalking me again)