Spiked Tears: Preview (Draft 1)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, May 17, 2012.

  1. They take extensive practice of use of weapons, books, strategy, it really depends on your strengths when you are born, which doctors can already tell, by one second, is your flower. The flower indicates what your strengths and weaknesses are, telling by the way it glows and shimmers through the sky, it's beautiful really.
     
  2.  Announcement 
    Hey guys! It's been great sharing my writing to you guys, you guys will always have a special place in my !
    Even the ones that hate me .....oh well. I love them anyway, wherever they are doing. Well anyway I'm having a contest and a feedback question!

    Which character do you like best, and who do you think should be more in the story? Feedback would be do good lol

    Contest: Whoever wants to be in the story as a character, tell me your name and what your personality is, and the best will be in the story, and you'll get to tell the story also, by telling me, lol. The reason why I made this cause I think its nice to have you into the story, since I added one already, which is going in soon....may the best one win! (Good luck)
     
  3. I like calla  she is a lot like me and wild 
     
  4. I think u have it good so far with evening the people out in the story
     
  5. Nice story man, action from
    The start. 
     
  6. Aww thanks guys  I can't WAIT to see the submissions for the contest.  love you all, thanks for reading.
     
  7. No srsly I can't....lol
     
  8. I like Bryn the best
     
  9. Hey sky where do I put my submission on here or what ?
     
  10. Well over here :
    1.Tell me the name you want
    2. Tell me your personality
    3. Submit here
    4. Let me judge 
    Also, if you win, you get daily scoops on the story and you can direct your char by telling me 
     
  11. Name: Solin Raven Pryde
    "Raven"
    She is kind and caring. She will do what it takes to get things over with. No matter what stands in her way, it is no obstacle course. For her it is the way of life and death. Do not make her mad or she will do things unimaginably
    Uncomfortable. She is the sister of Katherine and Primrose.(one is younger than Solin the other is the same age) Daughter of Lady Selena (deceased) and Lord Talbern
    Prefers to be called Raven and not Lady Solin or Lady Raven
    Looks: [​IMG]
     
  12. - Utterly amazed-
    I  It! But in this story, do u wanna be a sis of someone or solo? Like only child?
     
  13. Actually scratch that she is prim and Katherine's sister, she'll be an only child
     
  14. I have to make a prim and Katherine 
     
  15. Ok then I guess she'll be a sister
     
  16. Sometimes I wonder why I was picked into the training of Archery and Statistics(when I was a child), when my parents were puzzled and thought I'd be in Strategy and Combat.....my flower is a White Silver rose that forms a Golden dragon when shown in the light, overpowering that sun and causing a golden glow to shine on the edges of the dragon, causing it to look like it was flying. My mentors told me that my rose showed wisdom and accuracy, which they told me "I was born for this". I really was furious at the time, trying to get in mischief to send me to the classes that my friends were chosen to be in, it really was brutal since everyone in my classes thought I was a misguided little girl, who should have been sent to a better school that unforced the classes I wanted to be in, which caused me into depression, and it wasn't fun, I felt like my life just ended, that the tears possessed me to live the life of being lonely and mistreated, never getting a friend unless by force.....it was a tough time back then.
     
  17. But the luckily Whit came to mind, who's a guard at the moment, trying to be a general to serve I the war, it's his dream really. I couldn't stand being the leader of a war and not caring of what people died and whatnot, and I tell Whit that and he stiffens, realizing it's not the best job in the world, but it's just to follow the footsteps of his father, and grandfather, and great grandfather, it's a father thing. But Whits the person who would mostly end up being a wizard in a weapons shop, because he's been a bad boy in his life, making him get a book of wizard spells, which encased him in the world of magic! He just adores magic. When he was younger I recall, he started magic at the age of 5 and started playing tricks on me as if I was his little bunny out of a hat, which of course, annoyed me, enraged me, caused me to really hate him at the time. But he was in different classes, he was in Combat and Weapon Crafting, while I only saw him at din din(lunch). He used to use magic spells like levitate my food or cause my food to be a slug, which I never realized was him, until at the age of 10, when our training of our flower was finished, he explained all the tricks and knacks, which for once, I never saw coming, and furthermore, we started being friends and spending my lonely days in the outside, making fun of little critters who tried to leave the walls, but failed.
     
  18. Wb the sister of Bryn? Too soon? Lol
     
  19. Noo it's amazing
    I love it
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