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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Nov 11, 2011.
(it's good, keep going brigit I saw symbolism when I read 'bout the cat)
Mark: livi, grab her hands hard, firm
Livi: --pushes Bridget back almost falling--
Bridget: Ahhh -stops my self from falling and grabs livi's wrists pushing her back-
Livi: --almost falls but twist so I fall towards Bridget--
Jayy: whispers to Mark: Chick fight
Mark: I'm just glad that neither have fallen. *smiles* I think I jinxed it *falls back with livi*
Livi: AHHH!!! Jayy: We won we won we won we won we won
-I laugh- yay!!
Livi: pushes Bridget off Jayy then swims away- (xP)
Mark: *follows livi*
Ahhh!!! -I fall off Jayy-
Livi: RUUUUN
-I hit the water making a big splash-
Marquis: CANNON BAAAAAALL!
-I look at Jayy- we still won eeee!!! -I duck under water when Marquis cannon balls-
Mark: why?
-She sits in the sun-
Dave: --splashes Julie--
-I smile at Jayy-