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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by kim-ay, Nov 14, 2011.

  1. Lol but still update every day Kimmy!!! (; you can think of stuff and if you can't then text me
     
  2. Thanks britt!. And I'll try manda. But I'm not sure how that will work out.
     
  3. I ran to the car, started it up and drove straight to the coffee shop.

    I made it to the coffee shop in about 15 minutes and luckily Cora was still there. I ran inside and walked over to Cora but as soon as she saw me she walked over me "it's about time. You're late, wayy late!" she said as she crossed her arms. "I know but mom let me over sleep and she had a guest again today."
    "oh gosh, was it your dad again?" she calmed down instantly.
    "no it wasn't my dad, thankfully. It was....."
    "it was who!!" becca said as she walked up beside us.
    "it....was......it was jaco....Dunn"
    I said trailing off into thought
    "what was he doing talking to your mom?!" becca and Cora said at the same time.
    "I actually don't know!. I didn't find out." I said trailing off
    "since when are you guys friends again?" cora asked
    "I bumped Into him the other day at school" I replied
    "that's all?!" becca said sarcastically
    "well we just said hi, and I found out that his bestfriend is in a coma" I replied
    "bummer for him" becca replied sarcastically again
    "let's just order some coffee."
    I said as I looked at the menu
    "good idea" Cora said.
    "I'll take a frozen hot chocolate." becca said
    "one hot mocha, please" Cora said as she smiled.
    "and you, miss?....excuse me miss." the cashier girl said.
    "iris! Iris!" cora said as she nudged me
    "hmm?! Oh! Umm. One of what she is getting" I said totally lost.
     
  4. Keep going Kim 
     
  5. Seriously!! You got me trailing off right when I started to get going with the book. Keep it coming Kim!
     
  6. Lol thanks guys, I'll try. Manda are you gonna put your book on here?
     
  7. I threw away my book and it like got really sad in it so I didn't know how to make it better!! Lol.. So no
     
  8. Well you should dig it out or something and change it up. It was better than this!
     
  9. We got our drinks and walked to our table. As we sat down becca looked at me funny. "what happened?!. What were you thinking about" Cora asked as she took a sip of her drink.

    "hmm?" I said zoning back in "oh I just zoned out. No big deal. It's fine!"
    "okayyy" becca said as she looked at me goofy, Like she didn't believe me. It was obvious that I was trying to think of why jaco was there when I woke up.

    After we'd all had our coffee we sat there and talked about our weekend and how life at home was going. When we were done with our coffee we all decided to go shopping, which i was ok with because I hadn't been shopping in a few months. So we finished up and left, arriving at the clothes store about 10 minutes later and Cora instantly went to find stuff for me/her to try on. And becca did the same, only in the completely opposite side of the store. I just tried to find something I'd where. Not really having any luck I just started to pretend and run my fingers a crossed the clothes racks so becca and Cora wouldn't notice. They soon found me with loads full of clothes, they drug me to the changing rooms and Cora tried a few outfits on first, they were cute but I don't think I could wear them. Then becca tried some on and they were also cute only one I would wear tho. Then it was my turn and they gave wayy too many clothes to try on. I started with what looked like the "non-cutest" then found what looked like the "most wearable". I found quite a bit of clothes I liked.....a few I even loved. Cora was teasing becca that she actually found something i'd wear...I was even surprised myself.
     
  10. A New Year (Continued)

    We'd had coffee, Gone shopping, and now it was time to get something to eat then home. We'd all met up at steak and shake an got in line. We were about at the front when I'd saw jaco.


    He was working...As a cashier..
    "uh I have to...pee!, I'll be back"
    I said as the people in front of us were almost done being seated. "okayy I'll wait here so you know where we're seated!" Cora replied
    "that's ok. I'll find my way!" I said as I hurried off, i came back and I looked around. But couldn't see them, apparently s.n.s is popular on the weekends. I didn't realize i'd came back to the front until jaco said "can I help you?"
    He didn't realize it was me,
    "no I'm fine, thank you" I said not realizing it was him,
    It got awkward as soon as we both realized it, because I'd been avoiding him since I woke up to him and mum talking,
    I can't imagine what that woman told him. I finally spotted my friends and ran to the seat. "there you are!!" Cora said as I sat down. "what took you so long?" becca said. "nothing, I just or lost" I fakely smile. "mhmm, Sureee. I bet it was that cute boy you were talking to" becca Said as she smiled at me. "that was just jaco.. there's nothing between us. I used to be best friends, that's all. I just caught up with him, that's ALL!" I said as I laughed.
     
  11. No readers
     
  12. Thanks britt
     
  13. A New Year (continued)
    "so you mean to say, there's a cute guy that you know and you want to be JUST FRIENDS?!?" becca said as she give me a goofy look
    "well I don't know if he likes me more than that" I replied

    "mhmm, sure, I'll be back" becca Said as she got up and left. "
    "where are you goin?!. Where is she going?!" i said to Cora as she just sat there eating not paying attention to what we were talking about
    "hmm, what? Oh I don't even try to keep track of her, just wait and she'll come back" Cora said as she took another bite
     
  14. Sorry bout the short update
     
  15. Feedback?!
     
  16. dis is goooooood 
     
  17. Thanks people's who read it! I'm gonna try and update real soon