"Students , your assignment for today is......what do u want to be when u grow up , it is due on Friday! Make sure u get it done!" Ms Rose said. "Dad! I'm home , Ms Rose gave us homework today and it is about what I want to be when I grow up . " Paul said. " Dad , I want to be a superhero when I grow up , I want to protect Rewon City from EVIL save countless of lives ! " After dinner, Paul sat down on his favorite couch and turned on the television and was watching his favorite television show , " Captain Diapers to the rescue". " Oh no !!! Dad , Captain Diapers is losing to doctor BrainZap!! But if I were to be a villain , will I be the most powerful person in the world ? The question was etched in Paul's mind throughout the night....... In his dream......." Paul !! I shall never lose to a despicable EVIL villain like u !! Justice will prevail !!! " Early next morning , Paul was the first to wake up , he got his pen and paper and began writing....... "Once upon a time , there lived a superhero named Paul and a villain named.........." from the day forth , Paul vow to do good deeds , help those in need and be like CAPTAIN DIAPERS !!!! submitted by NEONEZ
Ok. So, I'm gonna post a story an actual draft because writing is a calm pastime. ___________ The tears rolled down Paul's face. He wretched and looked into the mirror. His blonde hair was matted to his head, and the dark circles under his eye looked like bruises on his paled skin. He looked down at the sink, the bathroom disappearing around him, and picked up the knife. He took a deep breath and slit his wrist. Blood poured from the cut; Down his arm, into the sink, on the cabinet. He clenched his teeth and let out a cry that echoed throughout his empty house. The painful memories flooded his mind. Paul had been abused as a young kid; sexually assaulted by his mother, beaten by his father. After each painful action, each painful word, he would cry himself to sleep, promising himself that he would be the good guy. That he would be the... Superhero. As Paul grew, the beatings and assaults became worse, and the intense boundaries stretched farther. Finally, he couldn't take it. As Paul's blood fled his body, the life became sucked out of him. His last thoughts were, 'I can't be the superhero anymore. This makes me... The Villian.' ______________ >83