Fatal Attraction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 10, 2011.

  1. If you stop writing the story I'll die.




    DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE?!
     
  2. No Pie Im glad SOMEONE likes it... Lol . I shall continue then
     
  3. Yes!! I love it  please continue...
     
  4. Bump!!!
    Update! 
     
  5. I love this story! 
     
  6. Sorry!!!! Finals have came up n I've been studing a ton!!!
     
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    I returned home as the sun rose just over tge horizion.. I looked into my bedroom and Saw her sitting there.

    "Raven? What the-" I asked

    "I followed your aura Jake, I am an awesome tracker." She winked.

    Luckily no one else was home to see an ELF in my room. She was wearing her short miniskirt, acting all sexy.

    All elves knew.. Even greater than a Hijous desire to kill was thier sex drive...and Raven was really realllly sexy. She was pissing me off with her sweet scent luring me closer to her, I couldn't stop.

    I walked to her and pressed my lips on hers.. She smiled in dominance. I wrapped my arms around her, and pulled her small body into mine..

    She began gasping. I pulled back and saw that I was breathing her life in. It wouldn't kill her, but it would damage her badly..

    "That was amazing!!" She smiled at me as she fell onto the bed. I smiled... I really liked this girl.. But I wasn't allowed to..

    I layed down beside her...I rubbed her cheek.. This was the fastest I'd ever fallen for a girl... Unfortunately she was an elf.

    I began kissing her again and I could tell she loved the feeling, but I did too.
    She fell onto me as our kisses grew more passionate.

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  8. I love this story!!
     
  9. For you, SensualPie

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    "Raven..." I smiled as I inhaled her scent. I kissed her neck and down to her collarbone. She slowly woke up.

    Her long black hair covered her naked body only slightly, and I basked in the feelings I felt the night before.

    She looked into my eyes and noticed her nudity. "Mmm... Jake," She whispered and yawned.

    "I don't know what the hell I'm thinking..." I smiled as I lowered my lips to hers. She gave in, her tongue twisting into mine, but I enjoyed her too much, and my hunger grew.

    "I need to hunt..."My eyes were already black. I hadn't killed in forever it seemed.

    "Jake, let me come.." She smiled, her purple eyes danced in mine.

    "No, I don't want you seeing me like that. A savage. No-" I growled.

    "Baby, don't growl, I only wish you were hungry for me..." She wrapped her bare body around mine, and kissed down my neck and back.

    "I still have time..." I growled as I rolled onto her in one sharp movement, and got lost in her, for the second time.

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  10. I think I'll say bump
     
  11. LMFAO James. XD bump