Fatal Attraction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Who thinks i should update tonight?
     
  2. Me...if you're not too tired 
     
  3. Me!!! 
     
  4. I looked up into the pouring rain at her window, and decided to enter in. I climbed through her open window and saw her sitting in a chair, drawing in a sketchbook.

    I leaned over her shoulder and saw her drawing my covens pendant, a crecent moon.

    "I knew you'd be back tonight," her velvet voice spoke." You left your pendant here when you where....uhmm..Sniffing me?"

    I laughed a little.. Sniffing. " Give it back I need it!!!" I growled.

    "Not until you tell me who you are!!!" She put the pendant behind her back.

    I swiftly pinned her to the wall.
    "Im stronger than you, you can't resist my will." I laughed at her scared expression.

    "Who are you a$$hole!!!?" She yelled.

    "Dont talk down to me b!tch. I could snap you in half in seconds."

    "Do it then!!" She yelled. I turned and grabbed her wrist, but something stopped me. She looked deep into my black eyes, as if she was daring me to do it. She had some strange control over me... Those eyes...

    "Tell me who you are," I demanded.

    "Raven Fier, nice to meet you, stalker"

    "Its Jake." I shot back. She approached me, and put a hand up to my face. I felt an electrical type feeling.. I couldn't comprehend, it was like she was controlling me, hypnotizing me...
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  5. Gasp!!! 
    Bump 
     
  6. Bump!!! 
     
  7. Update guys???
     
  8. Update!!! 
     
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    I threw her to her bed. She smiled slightly and sat up. "Why are you here, Jake?" She asked.

    "To murder you."I simply replied. She pierced me with her eyes. They were so inviting.. I couldn't help but to indulge in her innocence... She couldn't overpower me.

    "Look at me.." She pleaded oddly.

    I pinned her to the wall.. I began breathing in her scent.. She was so seductive.... Her hair fell gently around her gentle features.. She looked into my eyes, stabbing through my thoughts... I felt peaceful.. She was captivating me..

    "Hold your breath," she whispered. I couldn't stop her. My strength fell into helplessness under her. I hated this new feeling.. "Close your eyes." She held my face in her hands.

    I was enveloped by light, and I couldn't inhale.. That must have been the reason for holding my breath... I felt my feet grasp earth once more.. I fell, and she layed on me ..

    "I knew you would come, Jake. I've been waiting all my life... I love you.."

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