Fatal Attraction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Bump! 
    Update! Please...? 
     
  2. If you don't update I'll die... 
     
  3. And jake will eat her soul
     
  4. Updating now guys!!! Busy day
     
  5. Same thing as I said on torn sorry for begging but there really good
     
  6. I can't post long updates tonight I guess the weather is blocking good wifi signal !!!! Updating soon!!! Promise!!!
     
  7. I has a tip: whenever it says you can't post an update, just copy the whole update, enter the forums again, and post. It'll work  hope I helped! 
     
  8. Thanks Pie!!!!
     
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    The stars congregated over the lonely moon, as rain clouds made thier way over the busy night in London.

    I rose from my bed and headed out the door. My eyes were black with hunger. The rain soaked my black hair as I stepped into the night. I searched for my first victim.

    She stood at the edge of the street under a pink umbrella, twirling her long blonde hair and chewing her gum obnoxiously. I smelled her and decided that I'd do the world a favor and kill her.

    I followed her to a parking garage, where she was singled out and alone. I whispered from behind her, " I'll end your sad little life quick, I promise."

    She screamed as I snapped her neck, throwing her to the ground. I took my blade and tortured her. I cut slowly and finally pulled the blade through her torso. Blood poured out, the color of rubies. I inhaled her life, burning and seething into my lungs.

    I was pleased with my work, as I walked down the rainy avenue, towards the appartment building.... Towards my next target.
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  10. Bumbumbumm