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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jolteon, Jul 8, 2012.
Ben-no where yet, we habe to rest, especially you
Emily: okay.. You do too -smiles-
Ben-smiles- I will when i know your ok
Emily: -bites lip and smiles- I'm fine, why do you care so much? -laughs-
Ben-smiles that gash in your waist looks serious
Emily: it's fine, what about the hole in your calf -raises eyebrow-
Amanda:-lays on the branch.-
Ben-its small...i
Will:-fell asleep on the rock-
(darn) Ben-its a small wound...im really more worried about that huge gash
Lily:ugh just what I needed for me to get lost.
Emily: no its not.. And you? What?
(scratch that)
Emily: it's not that bad, I've had worse
Ben-still...im still worried
Emily: don't worry I'll live -hugs him-
Ben-smiles- Thats good -hugs her back-
Emily: -smiles- -pushes hair out of her face-
Will:-asleep-
Ben-and lies back against the cave-