Ur story is great u should check out my story the A.D Princess its really hoot btw ur story get a 10!!!
FAN FIC NEWS I'll be putting 1 new short stories and 3 stories. I'll be commenting and rating! To read the stories I mentioned scroll down to fan fic! Remember I will not tell the whole story (sometimes.) Story #1 Why me? This awesome story is about a girl Katalina Dreaming of killing herself with a knife. She wakes up and says to herself " No more cold pizza for me before I sleep!! " (lol) Her faternal twin, Katie sleeps next to her bed. She is like...let's say more beautiful than Katalina! They go take Katie's car, which was cleaned by the neighborhood boys. If she tans next to them IN HER BIKINI! (I'd so totally do that..) And Katie drove off to school. If you want to read the full story, scroll through Fan Fic, then it's there! Comment : I've got one word for this story..........THIS IS AMAZING!! Rate : 9.1 Story #2 first generation vampire war This vampire story is about a girl called Danielle. Her friends are vampires but she isn't, let's go to Danielle's point of view. She read a horrible vampire book in the school bus. She was on her way to school (of course!). She saw her best friend Kailey running towards her after she got off the bus. It was a cold day so they hugged each other to make themselves warm! They did that going into school, into their classroom. Danielle saw her other best friend, Sarah, and did the same with Sarah! They got to their seats and she saw HER OTHER, OTHER BEST FRIEND! To be precise, that was only her friends. Emit was his name. They were the outcast of the school, they're the only one's to wear black all the time!To read the rest of the story, go through fan fic and find it! Comment : this is just like a story of twilight! It's amazing and funny! I didn't really get into the story because this story is a must-see story! Rate : 9.1 Short Story #3 Good things, random times ( this is just a story that is just beginning so it'll be sort of short!) She was hanging from a tree, then a person said 'hi' behind her. It was her crush.. ( I told you it would be short!!) Comment : I love the start of the story! I'm looking forward for more! Rate : I can't rate it yet, maybe when there's more into it I can rate it! Story #4 Hidden This great story is about a detective who gets a case that involves a murderer called the Hidden night-time phantom. He/she murder's young men and women from the popular groups in school. Did I mention her name was Jordan? No? Ok! She gets a trainee partner to investigate the school she was in. Her partner is called Sami Rivers. They went to Jordan's car and went to her school. To read this story go through fan fic and it'll be there! Comment : This story is exactly like mine! Mine's about a detective (Drew) having a trainee partner (Kaylee) and they investigate a murder, and they check out the school! Plus the boss (Gallow). Rate : 9.1 Just a reminder, to read all these stories go through fan fic and it's there! Thanks for your time! HEIN
I like how you put the beginning in, and the part about the book, oh that reminds me of something!!!
The book!! Sorry, I can't spoil, but i am going to post a new story!! It's called ~The Wars Of Prunia~ lol i love writing
I like the way u r posting reviews for everyone posts and I expect 2 come back and see a lot of great stories every time I come on so I can check them out
I like his fan fic news, it's actually what got me to start reading the fan fic's here and to post one myself