Forbidden Dance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Karina-The-One-And-Only, Oct 14, 2011.

  1. So you hate my story 
     
  2. I like it... It makes me feel happy .-.
     
  3. Who hates your story?
     
  4. We met each other at the pond. We ate some food and layed down on the grass. She put her head on me and we stayed quiet. I couldn't help but to smile. We watched the moon the whole night. The next morning I woke up to see Karina not there and a note on my head. I read the note and it read: Dear Jonathon,
    I had to leave for school I didn't bother to wake you up because I left at five in the morning. Anyway, I love you and I'll see you at school ,kisses !
    Your Girlfriend,
    Karina
    Jonathon just smiled and packed up his things. He left to go change at his house.
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    Update in a few
     
  5. Leave please
    Please leave this thread/fan fiction story 
     
  6. You have to leave. Read the stuff
     
  7. It doesn't matter you still have to leave if the OP said to
     
  8. Hey you whore! Look under IMPORTANT- World chat an forum behavior
     
  9. I think it's great Aziza! 
    Don't listen to him.
    Update soon.
     
  10. I'm not updating till he leaves 
     
  11. He, she. No one gives a shit. Be an ass somewhere else.
     
  12. I never expected this outta you sophieclairr. I loved your stories. This here RUINED my vision of you.
     
  13. You really cannot read. Me I'll find Neon. As much as I hate being a snitch. It's immature you are continually doing this. If you don't like it you don't like it. Cool story bro. And she's doing an amazing job considering the fact it's her first from a boys POV



    Whoa. Your sophie. What a beotch you have turned out to be
     
  14. As of now, I'm so damn glad that I DON'T know you.
    Yeah, her story could use more details, better grammar
     
  15. Aww man. I spent forever typing that. It cut it off. 
     
  16. THEN TELL HER THAT, don't be a biatch about it.
     
  17. Oh I wasnt bypassing. In my opinion there's a line between bitch and beotch. Beotch is someone whose semi cool. Bitch is some one whose a completely rude person