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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WitchMother, Jul 15, 2012.
Jack: o hey mako, I need your help
Yeah.... Where's Zoe?
Sam: I don't know..
Lily:-curls up on couch-
Oh...ok... Thanks (floats toward the house)
Sam: -Nods- (BRB)
Mako: in what-smirk-
Jack: it's your girlfriend lily, she is acting weird. And by that I mean weirder than usual
(floats in the door and "sees" Lilly) Lilly!
Mako: if you need something else beside that come talk to me-walks away-
Jack: wait! I think she is dying
Mako: why do you say that?
Lily:-looks- huh? Who are you?
Jack: yup she is definitely dying
Mako: fine-sights-I'll go see what's up-goes to lily-
(floats over) it's me, Eon...
Jack: -follows mako-
Lily:aren't you dead?
Mako: -sees lily with eon-she doesn't need me I'll be outside-walks away-
Jack: -grabs mako- no stop! She is dying