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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WitchMother, Jul 15, 2012.
(the sword shifts turning golden and slimmer to match it's new owner)
Sam: -Gets up, rubbing her head-
Zöe: -flies away-
Sam: -Walks towards the house-
Lily:-looks at sword- what the-?
Jack: repeat after me... We won't find monsters that we know will KILL US!
Sam: Now is NOT the time Jack!
Lily:-looks at jack-
Jack: just trying to help...
Sam: -Frowns, walking towards the lake-
Lily:I think she's bipolar. -walking over to jack-
Sam: -Turns around sharply, glaring at Lily- ...
Zöe: -sits by the lake crying-
Jack: nice on detective
Lily:uh... -turns around and walks to room-
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Sam: -Shakes my head, starting to walk to the lake-
Lily:-goes to room and starts making the water in the fountain go everywhere-
Jack: -watches lily- you know.. Ruining the furniture isn't help!
Lily:-ignores him-