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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WitchMother, Jul 15, 2012.
Zöey: EVERYONE INSIDE NOW!!! HURRY!
Iris: -turns in direction of voice- Yup. And you are?
Mako; no it's alright I don't eat
Jack: I'm sorry... -starts to leave kitchen-
Kaitlyn:Stands up with help from eon (love the book eon btw)
Iris:- Zöey coming back. I can feel her.
Rose: -gets up and goes inside- What's going on? Why do we have to be inside?
Iris: What? You don't eat?
Jack: -sneaks up behind Iris and starts tapping foot-
Lily:uh I'm lily. Who are your parents?
Kaitlyn: Vlacas. Starts bleeding.
Zöey: Get inside now they are almost here! -runs to rose a pulls on her sleeve- come one let's go!
Mako: yes I don't like eating
Iris: Jack I know you're there I can feel you and hear you.
(scratch the rose part)
Rose: -runs inside with Zöey-
(walks into the courtyard watching the sky and the stars disappear, one by one) great...
(then scratch what i said)
Lily:what's coming?
Iris: Demeter,you?