Expecting the unexpected

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SurfingTurtle (01), May 31, 2012.

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  1. Bypass??
     
    #21 *_Rage_ (01), Jun 8, 2012
  2. Good plot, but it definitely needs a lot more detail. And there's a few grammar mistakes.
     
    #22 I-Love-Oreo-Pie, Jun 8, 2012
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