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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tash777, May 7, 2012.

  1. third page.... wow
     
  2. Maybe I should just stop writing this story.
     
  3. Everybody would be sad if you stopped but it's whatever you want to do. I bet everybody will understand
     
  4. Update I love the story
     
  5. LUV THIS STORY!!!!! 
     
  6. Thankfully, the worst didn't happen. I opened my eyes, and a slightly fuzzy sensation spread out from my mouth around my body.

    As soon as the fuzzy feeling reached my arm, all of the pain went away. It felt as though it was all being sucked out. After a few minutes, my arm felt fine and my cut looked like an ordinary scratch again.

    I made a mental note to myself to pick as many of these berries as possible, just in case this happened again. But what had happened? I decided to ask this mysterious girl.

    "isn't it obvious? You cut your arm somehow and mutant blood got into it. That's the effect it has.
    At first, your arm will look completely normal. After a few days, it will change. This change only takes a few hours. It brings headaches and other pains. The skin and veins around the area become blistered and inflamed. Some people collapse. After a week, you die. The only cure is these berries. Certain types of moss can help, but will not cure you."

    I reached up and grabbed my bag from the tree. I turned around and took a proper look at the girl. It struck me how young she was. Maybe she just looked younger than her age.

    "Thanks for all of the help. You look very young to be in the forest. How old are you?"

    "Fourteen. Well, I think I am anyway..."

    "you think you are? How can you not know your age?"

    "it's a long story. I don't think I should tell you."

    "Oh. Umm ok... Hey where are you from? I've never seen you in the village before. Do you need help getting back?"

    "There is a village?" her face lit up with interest.

    "yes! Have you lived in the forest for all of your life?" I said with a grin. That grin slowly slid off my face when I saw her expression.

    "well, I was born in the forest. I have never left it. Is that bad?" A confused frown appeared on her face.

    "huh? No no! It's just... Why aren't you DEAD?"

    "...Dead? W-why would I be dead?"

    What? How on earth could she have survived this long? The forest is full of death. Why isn't she part of it?

    "why would you be dead? Look around you! Do you see anyone else surviving in here?"

    "well, I see you."

    "yes, you see me. The person that should have been killed a long time ago. I survived, but even I couldn't last a week in here by myself. Come on. I need to get you out of here."
     
  7. !!!
     
  8. Haha she's been living under a rock
     
  9. BUMPCARRY ON
     
  10. I love my few remaining readers 
     
  11. I LOVE THIS STORY!
     
  12. Thanks  by the way I have just started writing a new story! It's called Goodbye Cruel World. It's just a quick story, nothing special. But I would still really appreciate it if you had a peek 
     
  13. Ooouuuuhhow she survive in that bloodied placewhat is she to even survive there!!tash update update!! !!!Shall take a peek at the other one too
    BUMP
     
  14. Wow so good Tash  i'm in love with this
     
  15. 3rd page 