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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Jan 17, 2012.
"What just happened?l
"You know that I was sleeping!!"
-Swims to Raven-
-Hugs her- "What happened?"
*grabs his arm and pulls him to the others* what happened?
"It was, Ms..." I sob, unable to speak, because I was traumatized
"Who?" *looks at Alida*
Alida -by now shaking in fear and coldness, teeth shatters, tears filling eyes-
-goes under water- -looks- -comes back up, and screams-
-I hold Alida and slowly swim away from her- "Stay here." -I swim down to the bottom of the lake-
"Tell me whats under."
"Shes right, there is a dead body under there"
I continue to cry, backing away from what I saw
-goes to Alida, and hugs her go warmth-
Rio looks at raven and asked in a worried voice "do you need anything ?"
(for*
Alida -sits alone, shaking, cries in fear watching Sal dive down-
(scratch my post) -I hold Alida tight- "I'll protect you."
"Dead body?That can't possibly happen to lakes." *jumps in and goes under*
"M-Ms. Anderson..." I croak, shivering. "She's dead!"