the secret circle

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by jacilu2, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. >:3 HAHAHA!! FIRST ON PAGE 3
     
  2. UPDATE
    Lynitas POV
    
    I couldn't believe what I was seeing! It was like a mansion no one floor there were thousands of doors that I could see! We were standing in a giant living room. Tobias walked in followed by Ashlynn and some brunette.
    "Girls are on the third floor. Guys are on the second. Find your door and inside is your room and a map so you don't get lost."

    He grinned at the brunette but she didn't seem to notice. Typical popular girl. I climbed the stairs and glanced at each door for my name. I saw Ashlynn enter a room and the brunette entered the one next to her. When I reached her door I saw the name read "Diana".
    Was princess Diana of France staying with us? I was shocked she'd be sent here! I walked to the other side of Ashlynn's door and saw my name. I glanced down towards Diana's and saw Audrey going into the one next to her's. I took a deep breath and opened the door.

    Tobias's POV
    
    I glanced at my phone on my nightstand. It was buzzing. The caller I.D. read "unknown caller". I pressed the green answer button. "Hello?"
    "Hello Four."
    "Captain!"
    He chuckled. "Have you received info yet?"
    "Not yet sir. I'm trying to get close to the princess."
    "Ah excellent choice she must know something about the circle. Keep trying agent."
    "Sir yes sir!"
    The line clicked. I knew I couldn't afford to waste time. I had to get close to her tonight.
     
  3. UPDATE
    Diana's POV
    
    I sat on the balcony edge with my legs through the railing dangling. I looked up at the sky and spotted Orion right away. Why couldn't I be strong like Ashlynn? Why am I so weak? I sighed and looked at the city lights in the distance. I looked down and saw the party everyone else went to.
    "Hey can I join you?"
    I don't know why he didn't startle me. Maybe it's because his voice sounded like melting honey. God I can't let him get to me.
    "Sure I guess."
    "Thanks."
    His dark hair glistened under the moon light. His normally dull blue eyes looked piercing out here. He wore a dark black t-shirt and a pair of blue jeans. He looked down at the party. I finally got up the courage to speak.
    "So why aren't you at the party?" I smiled.
    "I'm not welcomed when it comes to those parties." He smiled back.
    I twirled my necklace and out of nowhere he asked this weird question.
    "Do you know anything about the secret circle?"
    I was shocked. I was always told it was an urban legend. I didn't want him to know I knew anything though, so I got up and walked to the door. I looked back and answered, "No."
    With that I walked up to my room and shut the door.

    Captains POV
    
    Four couldn't fail. If he did I'd be ruined. He was my favorite agent, but sometimes emotion clouded his judgement. I needed my revenge on the circle, and what better way than to kill all of the elders before the could destroy me. I laughed menacingly at the thought. I grabbed the phone and texted to Four, "Once you've gotten the information... kill them.
     
  4. Is it good angi?
     
  5. =o update ^.^
     
  6. It's wonderful n I just realized FIRST ON PAGE FOUR ^.^
     
  7. Bumpau

    BRING
    UP
    MY
    POST
    AND
    UPDATE
     
  8. UPDATE
    Ashlynn's POV
    
    It's been 2 weeks since we first came here. Classes are boring and Tobias keeps trying to hook up with Diana. The good news is that all of us (Diana, Lynita, Audrey, and I) are in the same classes. Lynita and Audrey still haven't properly met Diana.
    I walked out to the green (which is a long strip of grass inbetween the north and south doors) with my lunch. As soon as I set my tray down I heard a commotion over by the tree. Lynita had punched a girl with long brown hair.
    I ran over and pulled Lynita away from Diana. Lynita thrashed against me.
    "Why are you protecting her she's just some stupid bi......"
    "She's the princess of France!"
    Lynita stopped and looked at me.
    "So you're like her bodyguard?"
    "Yes."
    She gave me a strange look. I could see the hurt in her eyes. She grabbed her tray and ran off.
    "Lynita... LYNITA!!!!! WAIT!!!!!"
    I watched her as she disappeared into the south entrance.

    Tobias's POV
    
    I watched Diana as she walked with her head held high and didn't cower like I thought she would. For some reason I found myself smiling. Why did the very thought of her make me forget my mission. I couldn't let it happen again, and yet... Without her I felt empty hollow inside. I went to the agency doctor and asked him what was wrong with me. He smiled and said,
    "You're in love."