OH MY BERRIES!!! I LOVE IT! Plus I've been wondering.... Since when did Angi zach happen!??? WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP ME IN THE DARK!!?!?! UPDATE
WHO THE HELL KNOCKED OUT MY BOYFRIEND >.> imma kill them no one harms him NO ONE!!! ^.^ awesome story by the way baby ^.^
Seems rushed. I mean, he got to school...and then lunch started? That's a big time skip. It's good for your second story though.
Eh...I would tear apart this story by every mistake and cliche...but I'm trying to maintain my good mood... I'll let it pass.
Then how can yu call something a cliché and point out mistakes if yu didnt read it 0.0 yur contridicting yurself
I did read it... How could I NOT LIKE IT, if I didn't read it? Which means, in sarcastic terms, I read it. Otherwise, I wouldn't have an opinion. Therefore, it's cliche. Got all that? Good.
-.-" yur mean... Will if yu think it's a cliché why comment and complain about it being a highschool themed story....