Highschool

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -_Devestator_-, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Love it. Like how it looks like a game or something.
     
  2. OH MY BERRIES!!! I LOVE IT!

    Plus I've been wondering....


    Since when did Angi zach happen!???

    WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP ME IN THE DARK!!?!?!



    UPDATE
     
  3. I will Tmr and we happened 2-3 days ago
     
  4. WHO THE HELL KNOCKED OUT MY BOYFRIEND >.> imma kill them no one harms him NO ONE!!! ^.^ awesome story by the way baby ^.^
     
  5. 0.0 we happened....Sunday Night ^.^
     
  6.  Bump!!!!
     
  7. Amazing story!!!!!!  U better update... Or else o_O
     
  8. Oh my God! I love your story Zach! Update! I wanna know if your alive or not xD
     
  9. He better be alive  or imma go hunting  >:3
     
  10. Nice Story  I Love It
    UPDATE
     
  11. Seems rushed. I mean, he got to school...and then lunch started? That's a big time skip.

    It's good for your second story though.
     
  12. Eh...I would tear apart this story by every mistake and cliche...but I'm trying to maintain my good mood... I'll let it pass.
     
  13. Well if its a cliché in your opinion and it seems like yu dont like it then why read it....
     
  14. How could've not liked it, if I didn't read it to start with? And by definition, it's cliche...
     
  15. Then how can yu call something a cliché and point out mistakes if yu didnt read it 0.0 yur contridicting yurself
     
  16. CONTRIDICTION!!!!!
     
  17. I did read it... How could I NOT LIKE IT, if I didn't read it? Which means, in sarcastic terms, I read it. Otherwise, I wouldn't have an opinion. Therefore, it's cliche. Got all that? Good.
     
  18. -.-" yur mean... Will if yu think it's a cliché why comment and complain about it being a highschool themed story....