Day Break (sequel to Hunting Dawn)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Jan 8, 2012.

  1. Update please!! 
     
  2. Ooooooooooh bumpppppp!
     
  3. UPDATE
     
  4. Taylor's POV

    Well I would be released soon, I wasn't sure if today or tomorrow but I didn't care.
    Something deep in my gut told me something bad is about to happen, and I wasn't sure completely what I was about to do..
    Sitting up in my bed I sighed, watching my heart monitor beep.
    I wish Justin was here.. Everything would be right if he wad here with me.
    I silently let a few tears fall down my cheeks.
    I looked out at the raging storm, and sighed, looking at Lily and Jareth aside in the chairs beside my bed.
    Justin. Were ever you might be.. I love you.

    Nancy's POV

    I rubbed my huge looking stomach, watching outside at the rain, jumping slightly at the lightening.
    The baby was growing fast, there had to be demon blood in it's body, no doubt.
    I didn't know what to do, I have no idea what a demon child would need, I just wish I had someone.. A father figure, for this child to have.
    Leaning back in my chair I let myself begin to weep.
    It was hopeless.

    Satan's POV

    Lilian, get ready for departure, I'll just check quickly with what's going on.. Above us, and we can take leave post-taste." I smiled kissing her cheek.
    Lilian gave me a wicked smile.
    "Yes my lord." She bowed, and turned to get her things ready.
    I took it upon myself to eye her up as she went.
    I smirked, and turned, leaping up to my burning stair case of hell.
    With each step it stung me more and more the closer I got to the door of heaven.
    It became agonizingly painful as my hand grazed the little hole in the door.
    I slowly peeked inside to heaven, my once home.
    I cringed at the thought and looked about.
    I saw two figures of angels floating near the hole.
    "Emmanuel sure is taking his sweet time down on Earth, he must be having a blast dealing with his nightmare of a brother." An angel boy with the name I could remember was Gabriel.
    I raised a brow at this.
    Emmanuel was walking with the mortals?
    "Yeah I heard he fell in love with some.. Unspeakable woman, won't Amelia be upset." The other angel said.
    "What was the girls name I wondered.. Do you know?" Gabriel asked the other angel.
    "Farah I believe.." The other angel spoke.
    My mouth parted in horror, and fury.
    Not my daughter! Not my Farah!
    My body began to turn to flames, engulfing my body.
    I clenched my fists in anger and hatred.
    She was coming home, now!

    Emma's POV

    "Who.. Who are you?" I asked the stranger in front of me.
    He held his hand out to me with a knowing smile.
    "My name is Darius." He said as I took his hand.
    But instead of taking it, he leaned down kissing it with a soft smile.
    I quickly pulled my hand back, a bit uncomfortable.
    "My name is Emma," I said hugging my legs to my chest.
    "Its a pleasure meeting you," Darius concluded.
    "Where are we?" I asked looking around for a way out.
    "It's just a cave, it's the only shelter around here for a few miles." He said handing me a blanket from behind him.
    I gratefully rolled myself in the blanket, shivering a bit from the cold.
    "Thanks for bringing me here." I said with a faint smile.
    "Of course, but I do wonder, Emma, are you unhappy?" Darius asked analyzing my expression.
    "Is it that easy to notice?" I asked looking down.
    "What troubles you?" He shrugged, watching me.
    "Oh a lot of things, I don't want to bore you with details but my life is hell right now." I sighed.
    He stayed quiet for a minute, seeming to look as though he was thinking about something deeply.
    After a while he finally spoke.
    "If you had three wishes what would you wish for?" He asked, now not meeting my gaze.
    I raised a brow curiously, but answered honestly.
    "I'd wish that Justin was still alive, I'd wish Nancy could find the man she was meant to be with, and that it wasn't possible for anyone to hide things from me ever again." I said, and yawned.
    "So you have wished it.. So shall it be." Darius said, and at those words everything went black.

    Bump? What's on your minds 
     
  5. Taylor's POV

    Well I would be released soon, I wasn't sure if today or tomorrow but I didn't care.
    Something deep in my gut told me something bad is about to happen, and I wasn't sure completely what I was about to do..
    Sitting up in my bed I sighed, watching my heart monitor beep.
    I wish Justin was here.. Everything would be right if he wad here with me.
    I silently let a few tears fall down my cheeks.
    I looked out at the raging storm, and sighed, looking at Lily and Jareth aside in the chairs beside my bed.
    Justin. Were ever you might be.. I love you.

    Nancy's POV

    I rubbed my huge looking stomach, watching outside at the rain, jumping slightly at the lightening.
    The baby was growing fast, there had to be demon blood in it's body, no doubt.
    I didn't know what to do, I have no idea what a demon child would need, I just wish I had someone.. A father figure, for this child to have.
    Leaning back in my chair I let myself begin to weep.
    It was hopeless.

    Satan's POV

    Lilian, get ready for departure, I'll just check quickly with what's going on.. Above us, and we can take leave post-taste." I smiled kissing her cheek.
    Lilian gave me a wicked smile.
    "Yes my lord." She bowed, and turned to get her things ready.
    I took it upon myself to eye her up as she went.
    I smirked, and turned, leaping up to my burning stair case of hell.
    With each step it stung me more and more the closer I got to the door of heaven.
    It became agonizingly painful as my hand grazed the little hole in the door.
    I slowly peeked inside to heaven, my once home.
    I cringed at the thought and looked about.
    I saw two figures of angels floating near the hole.
    "Emmanuel sure is taking his sweet time down on Earth, he must be having a blast dealing with his nightmare of a brother." An angel boy with the name I could remember was Gabriel.
    I raised a brow at this.
    Emmanuel was walking with the mortals?
    "Yeah I heard he fell in love with some.. Unspeakable woman, won't Amelia be upset." The other angel said.
    "What was the girls name I wondered.. Do you know?" Gabriel asked the other angel.
    "Farah I believe.." The other angel spoke.
    My mouth parted in horror, and fury.
    Not my daughter! Not my Farah!
    My body began to turn to flames, engulfing my body.
    I clenched my fists in anger and hatred.
    She was coming home, now!

    Emma's POV

    "Who.. Who are you?" I asked the stranger in front of me.
    He held his hand out to me with a knowing smile.
    "My name is Darius." He said as I took his hand.
    But instead of taking it, he leaned down kissing it with a soft smile.
    I quickly pulled my hand back, a bit uncomfortable.
    "My name is Emma," I said hugging my legs to my chest.
    "Its a pleasure meeting you," Darius concluded.
    "Where are we?" I asked looking around for a way out.
    "It's just a cave, it's the only shelter around here for a few miles." He said handing me a blanket from behind him.
    I gratefully rolled myself in the blanket, shivering a bit from the cold.
    "Thanks for bringing me here." I said with a faint smile.
    "Of course, but I do wonder, Emma, are you unhappy?" Darius asked analyzing my expression.
    "Is it that easy to notice?" I asked looking down.
    "What troubles you?" He shrugged, watching me.
    "Oh a lot of things, I don't want to bore you with details but my life is hell right now." I sighed.
    He stayed quiet for a minute, seeming to look as though he was thinking about something deeply.
    After a while he finally spoke.
    "If you had three wishes what would you wish for?" He asked, now not meeting my gaze.
    I raised a brow curiously, but answered honestly.
    "I'd wish that Justin was still alive, I'd wish Nancy could find the man she was meant to be with, and that it wasn't possible for anyone to hide things from me ever again." I said, and yawned.
    "So you have wished it.. So shall it be." Darius said, and at those words everything went black.

    Bump? What's on your minds 
     
  6. Double post ftw 
     
  7. Woah double post!
     
  8.  and I think things are gonna get a whole lot worse
     
  9. BUMP NOW PEOPLE
     
  10. Bump this chiz  should I give up on this story for a while?
     
  11. No bump and update...
     
  12. Update pwease
     
  13. No, don't stop, please... This is such an amazing story! 
     
  14. DONT U DARE GIVE UP ON THIS Bump
     
  15. I'll cry!



    Alida
     
  16. If you give up on this, I shall not update Deadly Sin.  Do what momma says an continue writing! 
     
  17. Yes momma  but only cause your story rocks my socks