Day Break (sequel to Hunting Dawn)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Jan 8, 2012.

  1. Kristine's POV

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    I walked along the roads of Haven, blood stained up the sides of my arms.
    It felt so good, this urge to kill, to feed off of these humans, take away their souls, all mine.
    Wiping some blood off of my lips, from when I had bit into my last victim I looked up to see the apartment my master had said.
    This was were Elijah lived, I was here now to learn from him.
    As stupid as it was, he was the only man I truly admired.
    He was bad, he was uncaring, unfeeling, just like me.
    I trudged up the stairs to this old smell apartment, and kicked open the door to Elijah's room.
    "What are you doing back already?" A tiny female voice called from inside the room.
    Hmm, what do we have here.
    I walked inside, scanning the area.
    It smelled of human, and demon mixed up pretty good.
    I then froze in my tracks as a tiny girl came out, wrapped tight in a bed sheet, her hair a complete mess on the top of her head.
    Then I recognized Chris walking out with the sheet around his waist, wrapping his arm around her shoulder.
    But as they saw me they both paled, and stood still in their place.
    I glared on surprise.
    "Please tell me you didn't." I snapped at Chris with a glower.
    "Please don't say anything to Miranda." Chris begged.
    The girl beside him looked down to the ground in shame.
    "Why shouldn't I, you know Miranda would probably kill you both." I said with a growl.
    "Look, Kristine I know your here for Elijah, so can you just stick to paying attention to him, not me!" Chris yelled, his eyes going darker.
    "You can't play them both Chris, I know that's what you do.. I wont say anything.. As long as you promise something." I said with a raised brow.
    "Fine.. What do you want?" Chris muttered, hugging the girl to his chest.
    "Wait, were is Elijah?" I cut in, a bit anxiously looking around.
    Chris rolled his eyes at me.
    "He's with Emma." He said simply.
    I narrowed my eyes.
    "Where." I demanded.
    "If I knew I'd tell you, now you tell me what it us I have to do!" Chris snapped becoming impatient.
    "Well..," I began with an evil smirk.

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  2. Sorry the picture is so big 
     
  3.  It's still awesome!! Bump!! 
     
  4.  gasp!
    Bump!
     
  5. BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP lol and BUMP!!!
     
  6. This. Made. My. DAY!


    THANK you SOOOOOOO much for making Kristin so wonderfully EVIL! Loving this, keep it going!
     
  7. More!!
    May I be either Editor or Specialist? Thank you!! :D
     
  8. May I be an Editor or a Reader?
     
  9. Awesome update BUMP
     
  10. New update coming up in a few minutes 