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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. ^_^ updating tonight!!! sorry guys ive been busy with personal things ._. but, im not gonna let this story die ^_^ so i should be updating daily... Any questions or concerns just wall or pm me
     
  2. You need to update Wumman
     
  3. OMG AN UPDATE!
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    I looked at the pregnacy test. My heart sank. I began to sob into my knees. I heard a knock on the bathroom door. I looked up in shock and worry.

    "Who is it?"

    "Its Mason."

    I jumped up. 'What the hell?! Now he pops up out of now where?!' I thought. I stuffed the test into my back pocket and opened the door.

    "Julie, Im so sorry! My phone got stolen when I left Aly's house. And I just stayed with my mom cause i thought you didn't want to see me."

    "Really Mason? You could've called from your mothers!"

    I pushed past him and walked to the girls. Lisa was doing her little creepy drawing thing, Tiffany was sitting upside down in the sofa and Aly was watching tv. They all looked at me, Mason came behind . I shrugged him off and took out the test.

    "Im.... pregnant."

    "Oh my god..." They all said simultaniously

    Aly and Tiffany jumped up and hugged me. Mason stumbled onto the sofa. Lisa just kept drawing not paying attention.

    "Mason?"

    "Julie, are you sure?"

    "Pregnacy test said so and I've been having morning sickness for the past few days."

    Aly and Tiffany jumped around and started talking about a baby shower. Mason stepped outside and I followed after.

    "Mason."

    "We're going to be a family."

    "Yes we are."

    We hugged and walked back inside. Lisa looked at us with a creepy stare. I looked back at her.
    She stood up grabbed her bag and walked over to Mason.

    "Mason can you drive me to my friend Alicia's house?"

    "Sure, I'll drive you."

    I watched as they put on their jackets and walked out the house. I sat at the sofa looking out the window. They drove off into the dark and my suspicion rose about Lisa.
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  4. Good job can I be in it? ^_^
     
  5. Suspicion

    Suspicion

    SUSPICION!!!!!

    You are killing me with all of this suspense!!!!

    CLIFFHANGER HERE

    CLIFFHANGER THERE!!!!

    I love it! :3 lol

    Hahahahaha

    UPDATE MOTHER DEAREST!!!!!!

    BUMP
     
  6. Can't wait for update =D
     
  7. First on page 12 
     
  8. Bump update soon please x
     
  9. OMG AN UPDATE!!!! 
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    ***Lisa's POV***

    I sat there. In the passenger seat of my brother-in-laws car. As he drove me to my friend Alicia's house. I stared out into the darkness of outside. The darkness, it reminded me of how my heart has turned now. Black, pitch black with hate and fustration. My heart and soul was never like this. I was as pure as snow. But, then Mason entered my life and turned it gray. He took my sister from me. My bestfriend and the person I adored. But, after tonight my world has turned black. Because now Julie was pregnant. And that child will take my place in my sister's heart. And it's all Masons fault. He got her pregnant and he ruined my life! Worst thing is my sister doesnt even realize it! So, tonight I will make it known how I feel and my friend Alicia is going to help me.

    "We're here Lis."

    "Will you open my door my hands are full."

    "Umm ok?"

    I watched as he exited the car and jogged to my side. I quickly organized my stuff kn the dash board and looked at Alicia as she stood in the window. I smirked and slid out a smooth stainless steel razor blade sharp knife. and hid it under my bag.

    He opened my door. I looked up at him smiling, he smiled back at me and moved out my way so I can exit the car. As i stood on the pavement I held up the knife. His eyes widened with confusion and fear. It made me chuckle.

    "Lis-Lisa what are you doing with that?!"

    "Oh nothing Mason. Why? You dont like it?"

    I stepped closer to him. He tripped on a small hole on the side walk. I leaned over him and plunged the knife deep into his heart. I repeatedly punctured that heart that has taken my sister from me. After about 5 minutes or so I removed the knife and stares at the crimson colored blood that dripped from the knife and my hands. I looked at Alicia as she exited her house and dragged Mason's body to her back yard. It was now time to make my next move and Alicia was going to help.
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  10. BUMP, wall me next update
     
  11. Bump! What does it mean?