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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Hey guys, it's not letting Xxsimply_mexX update so she has sent it to me through pm.

    UPDATE
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    "DIE JU--"

    I stared at Lisa in shock as she fell to the floor. Blood and brain matter spattered all over me. Alicia was in shock at what had just happened to her lover. She released me and rushed to Lisa's side.

    "NO LISA!!!!" She yelled and cried histerically. I fell to my knees in disbelief of what had become of my sister. 'Oh god! My sister was just killed infront of my! WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING!' I began to think. I was paralyzed as I stared at Lisa. Unable to move, to think or to process all the events occurring on this horrible night.

    "YOU KILLED HER!" Alicia yelled picking up the knife and runming towards me. Another gun shot was fired. Right through Alicia's temple. Blood spilled all over me again. I hugged my stomach staring at the horrible scene. I was in utter disbelief. My sister and her lover killed. On the same night as Mason and my friends. I began crying and screaming at the loss of my loved ones.

    "WHY!!!!!"

    "Ju-lie! Your o-k"

    I looked to where I had heard the voice and saw that Troy was on his knees hold his side and a 9 mm silver barrel gun. He fell over hold on to his side still. I rushed over. His eyes struggling to hold onto dear life. I searched him and found his phone. I quickly called 911 and had an ambulance on its way.

    "Troy you cant die! STAY WITH ME TROY!!!!!!!"

    I cried trying to keep him alive. I heard sirens in the distance. Seconds later the perimedics and detectives came running to where I was with Troy. The EMT's rushed Troy and I to the ambulance van and the detectives took my statement as I was being cared for. The cheif sent 2 squads to Alicia's townhouse to discover the other bodies. Troy and I were rushed to the hospital. After hours of being treated I was relieved to find out that Troy and my unborn child had survived. I went into Troy's room and sat there waiting for him to awaken. I began thinking 'My life will never be the same after what I had just faced with my delusional sister'
     
  2. Amazing story babe I love it 
     
  3. Amazing
     
  4. Oh dang they dead!!! Whoop whoop!

    Gosh I'm happy the baby is still good!

    UPDATE

    Unless... It's the end

    BUMP!!
     
  5. That was the last update guys!
     
  6. BUMP!!!!!
     
  7. 0.0 on page 4? Wow ._. well my fellow readers if you are still looking at this story check out my new collab The Kidnappers Secret if you havent already k 
     
  8. Bump!
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    Hehe.
     
  9. Jeez... That's a little dark...
     
  10. -.- off my thread tristan!
     
  11. Bump. Great writing.