War Of Creatures 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Jan 26, 2012.

  1. (Ahh. That's bypassing in their eyes. They don't realize it has another meaning)

    -I gently stroke her face-

    "No you didn't."
     
  2. (eh...cöcky isnt a bad word..just have a..ok I'll shut up now. )
     
  3. (Yes they do. They just are doing their job.)
     
  4. ()

    -touches the place she had bit him-

    I'm so sorry

    -in a hushed tone-
     
  5. -I look into her eyes my expression soft and caring. I'm concerned more for her than myself-

    "You have nothing to he sorry for. You were doing what your instincts told you."
     
  6. -looks in his eyes calming a bit, gently kissing him-

    I'm not safe to be around
     
  7. -I return the kiss tenderly-

    "I want to be close to you. I want to he bound to you always."

    -I slowly reach into my pouch and pull out a box. I open it up to reveal a beautifully crafted elven ring-

    "I love you and want to be yours. Will you marry me?"
     
  8. -eyes widen staring at the ring for a moment, touches the ring with her finger, and peeks up at him-

    On one condition..
     
  9. -I look down at her-

    "Anything."
     
  10. -watches him carefully-

    Marriage between to different species is illegal and dangerous if caught. So.. Can I turn you.. At least I won't be able to hurt you. You'll be the first half elf half vampire..

    -weak smiles-
     
  11. -I stay silent for a long time thinking.-

    "I'll do it..."
     
  12. -nods and takes the ring, sliding it on-

    Then I say yes.

    -smiles hugging him close-
     
  13. -I smile wrapping my arms tightly around her-

    "I'd do anything to have you as my wife."
     
  14. -lays her head on his shoulder-

    I love you so much..

    -closes eyes-

    When do you want to do the turn
     
  15. -I stroke her back-

    "As soon as possible. If now is alright then let's do it."
     
  16. -bites lip looking back up at him-

    This is going to hurt.. A lot.. For a long time

    -scoots into his lap, leaning up inches from his neck-

    Ready
     
  17. -I close my eyes and take a deep breath-

    "I'm ready."
     
  18. -bites inti his neck, injecting on her venom, before pulling away to watch-
     
  19. -I feel nothing for a few seconds and then scream in agony as excruciating pain hits me-

    (So what exactly is supposed to happen? I know nothing about vampires lol)
     
  20. (it feels like ur body is being burned alive, it feels hotter with each hour, usually it takes three days, but u can decide when it ends)

    -bites lip watching sadly-