War Of Creatures 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Jan 26, 2012.

  1. -I speak unsuspecting of Alida sudden predator state-

    "I just wanted you to know the full me..."
     
  2. -creeping up behind him, eyes red, licks lips, opens mouth a little-

    Is that what you really want

    -whispers in a strange dark voice, that wasnt herself-
     
  3. -My thoughts are too busy racing to notice the change in her voice-

    "I offered you the vial and you threw it into the water."
     
  4. -hands go down on his shoulders and jumps up biting into his neck, wrapping her legs around his waist-
     
  5. -I drop to my knees in surprise and pain. The color drains from my face as the blood leaves it. My body senses the danger and begins the rapid blood making process. Color slowly returns-
     
  6. -after a second eyes return to blue, realizes what she is doing, flys herself off him and to the other side of the boat in seconds, on her knees, hands shaking, blood covering her face-
     
  7. -I clutch the bite on my neck weakened. I slowly rise to my feet almost instantly falling again-
     
  8. -hugs her legs to her chest, doesn't move, doesnt breath, locks herself away in horror, probably won't surface for days; depressed-
     
  9. -Strength slowly begins to return to me and I rise to stand again. I wobble and look over at Alida. I slowly walk over to her and sit down beside her. I wrap my arms around her comfortingly not saying a word-
     
  10. -sits there like a rock, unmoving, unfeeling, blank expression-
     
  11. -I speak softly-

    "Alida....Please answer me..."
     
  12. -ducks head lower in same, body quivering in sobs she was suppressing-
     
  13. -I pull her into my arms so she's in my lap.-

    "Shhh....im here. I'm okay..."
     
  14. -pushes him away backing up-

    Don't come near me, I'm a monster! I'll hurt you.

    -sobs-
     
  15. -I refuse to let her go and pull her back-

    "No your not. Your the girl I love and I refuse to let you leave me because you think your a monster."
     
  16. -cries quietly in his chest, curling into a ball of pity, sadness and self loathing-
     
  17. (I got silenced )
     
  18. (what for?)

    -I hold her close rubbing her back soothingly.-

    "Shhh...I'm here for you always."

    -I think of a way to bring her out of this state-
     
  19. (yeah Alida I saw on campus. Sugar_Plum_Princess has been silenced for 24 hours. Some mod silenced her. No idea why. Plus a whole bunch of other peeps)
     
  20. (I said côcky )

    -looks up at him and cries softer-

    But I hurt you!