Revenge Of The Cold Hearted

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Aug 23, 2012.

  1. V yu have to update! they goin to sin city!
     
  2. O.O FIRST ON PAGE 7!!!! WOOO AND WAT PEEPS!
     
  3. Bump 
     
  4. OMG May and I have homework maybe later
     
  5. Bumping my story don't want it lost ill update later todayVegas time baby
     
  6. Update!!!!!
     
  7. Update:
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    I sighed as I crawled into the air vent moving through the hotel vents. I hated the gross cobwebs and rusty cramped space but I ha to suck it up. I found the mobsters room and sat there waiting. He finally emerged from the bathroom and called someone I listens closely.

    "Dylan did you get her here?" He paused. I gasped could it be? Dylan betrayed me?! I began to feel hot tears run down my face. "Good her her to the bar later on so we can finish the job," he hung up.

    I jumped onto him and snapped his neck. I jumped off of him cleaning up the blood spill. I left the room searching for Dylan.

    "Hey hot stuff," I stopped and faced the voice of course it was Dylan.

    I smiled getting closer "Hey sexy." I grabbed him by the collar "so your the one working with the mobster huh?" I giggled. "I should've known." He stared at me wide eyed.

    "How-" I put my hand to his mouth.

    "Shhhh sweetheart this is only hurt a lil," I grabbed his neck and snapped it dropping him to the floor. I smiled looking Down at him.

    "Mom I love you and I hope you can finally find peace where ever you are,"
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  8. Final updatesorry it's short but totally sweet
     
  9. It's awesome!!!!
     
  10. Yes first on page 8!!!!!
     
  11. Haha it's a bad ending I'm so tired I just wanted to end it so I can start a new one