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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Aug 20, 2012.
Jodie: I could kill you write now but I'm not... Is that good enough for you?
Jack: no
Jodie: well then I'm sorry -looks at jack-
Jack: -looks her in the eyes-
Jodie: -looks back at jack in the eyes then looks away-
Percyous:*sits next to a building and takes off then studies helm*
Jodie: I better go before you shoot me... -walks away-
Darren: sorry If I'm making you feel awkward
Ava:-shrugs- uhm I guess it's ohk.
Jodie: -climbs on top of the old factory and goes to sleep-
Darren: I just can't stop looking at your beauty
Ava:-looks at him- I'm not beautiful.
Darren: yes you are
Angel -Sitting by a lake-
Ava:-blushes a little but hides it looking confused-
Darren: I just wanna do this-leans forward and kisses her-
Ava:-frozen for a second then kisses him back. Then pulls away really fast backing up-
Darren: -turns crimson red-sorry
Ava:-just looks at him frozen-
Darren: what's wrong-looks at her confused-