One Final Case

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by i_am_ironman_, Nov 3, 2012.

  1. hey Karl great leave but i want to know how the body was found. Very interesting piece of writing
     
  2. Yay first one lol
     
  3. Update

    The flashlight illuminated the body just enough to reflect the round shining nail heads projecting though the body into the poll behind it.

    "Oh wow..." the chief gasped. "so that's what she ment by Your Move." The nails were neatly put in place to spell out the two words, Your Move and were not the only things fascining the body to the poll so we learned when the lift arrived. There were also many tiny wires wrapped around various parts of the body hidden by the victims cloth and wrapped back around the poll. Next I moved the light to the left hand and noticed the 4th finger was missing as usual.

    It took around an hour for the team on the lift to get the body down, having to remove every nail and wire carefully to not tear open the holes any more. I waited around untill most of the officers and the lift had gone taking the body with them. Only the chief, a repair man from the phone company making sure the poll was stable enought to withstand the elements, varrious reporters, and myself.

    The chief finally broke away from the reporters long enough to walk over to me and hand me a note saying "Thanks for everything your doing Jim I know you retired from being an investigator but the murders were getting much more frequent and we found a note on one of the victims. He handed me the note and it read You better get Jim Caraway on this case soon or I'll start murdering someone everyday until he takes the case. I've got a score to settle. Do you know anyone who would want to get revenge for anything you did?"

    "No, not that I can think of off the top of my head but I'll definitely think about it and try to come up with a clearer answer" I replied exhausted.

    "Jim, you look tired. Go home and get some rest you can think about the note tomorrow, we need you well rested and as sharp as possible if we ever want to catch this lunatic."

    "Alright chief" I yawned. I'll try to think up who could have written the note tomorrow and I promise I'll stop by the station in the afternoon with any and all evidence I've acquired.

    "Okay looking forward to it Jim, goodnight and be safe" he replied as I got into my car and started the engine.

    "Goodnight chief" I responded alright half asleep.
     
  4. It's amazing!
     
  5. Updating soon
     
  6. Update (very short)

    I was half way home when I noticed the car following me, but I was too tired to realize it at the time. As I continued home, the car continuously got closer and closer until they were basically hitting my car. Thinking they were trying to pass me, I pulled into the next gas station to let them pass but instead they followed me in and stopped right next to me. I could have swore I saw the barrel of a gun but it was instantly gone when a police car pulled in for some gas, and the car just drove away.

    I have always wondered if that was Nick Gregory in the car, but I never saw him as the type to use a gun, after all he hadn't yet. I continued on my way and fell asleep the second my head hit the pillow, after all tomorrow was going to be another big day filled with surprises.

    (Longer update planned for tonight)
     
  7. It's good!
     
  8. Keep updating its getting to be very breath ant wait to find what is happening
     
  9. If I get 3 post from different people ill update and consider finishing the story
     
  10. =o that's 1, two more to go 
     
  11.  Oh yu'll get 3 alright
     
  12. Bump!!!!
     
  13. need 1 by the end if the day  and ill update once
     
  14. Doesn't look like it =/