Detective. Drew

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  1. Detective Drew Chapter 4 - injury

    " Ok! It's time for the girls match!"

    Kay backed away as Rogue and Deezy got closer to her. Deezy jumped at her but Kay dodged. Then Kay went to kick Rogue and punched Deezy behind her. Rogue took advantage of Kay while she was distracted and kicked her on the forehead. She fell, then Rogue tried to stomp on her but she rolled over. Deezy jumped right in front of her and stool her pointy black boot on Kay's stomach. Deezy picked her up but Kay took out her revolver and shot her. Before Rogue could take out her guns Kay shot her.

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    KAY IS THE WINNER!

    Ok readers! From this point on my charters will be the ones talking!

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    Kay walked to Drew. She saw that Drew was owned by Big Al and Konrad.

    " Dude, YOU GOT OWNED!!" Kay laughed.

    " I wasn't trained to fight... But if I was, I would've owned them..."

    " hehe! Yeah right!"

    " Let's just go.."

    They went into the Black Mazda. The rained stopped but it was still dull. They went to Jimbo's and it was more old then O'Carl Bar. It was a green bar and it had graffiti everywhere. But the graffiti wasn't anything good.

    They went inside and saw a bartender and he had brownish blondish hair, his eyes was so blue, that men and women get lost in it.

    " Can I help you?" the man said.

    " Yes, what is your name?" Drew said getting his notebook out of his shirt pocket.

    " Steven " Jimbo " Crew."

    " The owner of this bar?"

    " yes."

    " Do you know a Leah Moore?"

    " Yes I do, she was supposed to get three bottles of beer two days ago...but she never showed up.."

    " Ok....do you know anybody who would hurt her?"

    " She went here once, but when she was drunk she told me she didn't have any."

    " ok, we know that already.., Do you know-

    " Oh wait! I remember her trying to steal from this rich chick....um....Emma was her name I think.."

    " Hm...ok, do you know what car she drove with??"

    " It was a.......red Mercedes.."

    " Ok" Drew said " Do you have a phone?"

    " Yeah, it's over there." he pointed at the right corner.

    Drew went there and Kay followed.

    " Detective Drew, badge 1313.."

    " How may I help Detective?" The operator said.

    " I need a red Mercedes that went to " Jimbo's bar"

    " Ok, Detective....."

    "....."

    " There is three in that bar, there's a Quinn Connors, an Emma-

    " Where's Emma's car now?"

    " She is at home Detective...she goes to school with Leah Moore."

    " Perfect."

    He hung up and wrote it down in his notebook, he has two locations two go, there's The school and The Jewellery store. They asked The Moore's one more question before they left, it was WHERE DID THEY GET THE JEWELLERY. and it was in the only Jewellery store near The Moore's residence.

    They decided to go separate ways, since Kay liked Jewellery, she went there. And Drew went to The National California School. They drove to the detective station and Kay got her brand new motorcycle.

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    Drew drove left out of the station while Kay went right to go home. Drew parked at the nearest Café and went inside. The Café had a huge coffee picture at the top of the Café. It was light blue and had windows everywhere, even the door was glass.

    He brought his laptop bag and pushed the door open. He sat down and the waiter cam to him.

    " What would you like?" the lady asked.

    " A coffee and a ham and lettuce sandwich."

    She wrote it down and left. Drew got his new Apple laptop out of his bag. He went through the files for the case. It was 9 pm. The sky was pitch black. No stars was out but the full moon was.

    He looked at Leah's file. And looked at Luka's file.

    " It's all the same..."

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    Kay drew fast and dodged threw every car in traffic. She went to the highway no cars was out so she went faster. Her helmet was almost slipping off so she tightened it more, just then she lost balance and crashed into a truck..

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    Drew looked at the description, hobbies and if they drank. It was ALL the same.

    " Who would haunt m-

    " Here's your order sir." The lady had two sandwiches on the tray she was holding. The coffee was there too.

    " Um, thanks."

    He took it from the lady and turned off his computer. The sandwiches were in a plastic box. He took one out and took a bite.

    CAUTION! FROM THIS POINT ON, IT WILL ABOUT HIM EATING! SO IT'LL BE BORING.

    He took another bite, then took a sip from his coffee. He took three bites. He took one small bite. Then he ate a quarter of the crust. The another, then another and then another. He took out his other sandwich and took a big bite then a small bite. He took another sip of his coffee he finished his sandwich and he took a little gulp of his coffee.

    CAUTION! FROM THIS POINT ON IT IS NOT BORING!

    He took his coffee with him and put five dollars on the counter. He left and put the key in the ignition. And turned it sideways. Before he could leave he got a phone call. It was Luke.

    " Hello?"

    " Hi Drew, it's Luke, we've got some bad news..."

    A few minutes later he hung up and drove as quickly to the hospital.
     
  2. Great update and lol @ him eating
     
  3. I'll haunt people. In fact I have a lust already....
     
  4. List... Damn it! I'm so freaking pissed off.
     
  5. Um.....who's in the list...........?
     
  6. My boss

    Telina
    And everybody else
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  7. The parents of Leah should busted in the coffee shop and stole ur sandwich lol jk
     
  8.  am I going to be okay?!
     
  9. Probably
     
  10. There can't be a chapter today coz my family has some problems.
     
  11. O ok hope everything is fine
     
  12. Sorry, but I think I have to take a break from writing, due to family problems again..
     
  13. Ok, I might be writing again, so jeep an eye on this thread!
     
  14. DETECTIVE DREW

    Drew came in the hospital, and asked the lady, " Can I see Ms. Kayleen please??"

    " You may certainly..." she began, flipping through pages from a big white book. " Hm.... She is in rooom..... A23!"

    " Thank you!" he rushed into the elevator and pressed the button that went to the 4th floor. He came out and glanced at every door, " 19,20,21..." He would mumble to himself. He found the room Kay was in. He knocked on the door, and a nurse came out.

    " You must be Mr. Drew?" She said.

    " Yes, can I see Kay for a sec, please?"

    "Ok"

    After she left he went in seeing Kay in a hospital bed, pale. He shut the door behind him and walked over to her.

    "K....Kay?"

    "who... i....is that?" she would say faintly.

    " It's me, your partner..."

    " D...Drew????"

    " Yes, its me!"

    " I saw the... P..person who collided w...wi...with me... H... He's-"

    " Sh, don't talk to much, you can tell me, once you're 100%."

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