Detective. Drew

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. Your the dead body! You're like a main character!!!




























    but your dead...
     
  2. Haha I know  thanks for putting in your story !
     
  3. I updated my story
     
  4. I HAVE GREAT NEWS!
     
  5. Starting on Monday I'll be posting FAN FIC NEWS AND DETECTIVE DREW DAILY!!!!
     
  6. No prob! Can you spread the word, on the people on the thread? I'm to lazy to do it!
     
  7. It's really really good!! Continue your story or my  chicken  will haunt you 
     
  8. Seth you better Countinue or the ghost of Salline-chan(me) will kill you!
     
  9. lol Poopy Rat again?
     
  10. Yeah, poopy rat again!
     
  11. DETECTIVE DREW 2 chapter 2 - Seth and Jenny

    The Black Mazda moved through the rainy day of California. The sky was dull, the city was quiet and the Black Mazda was the only car on the road. They reached Farley Street, the street where Leah Moore lived. The houses were 2 storey's high, all of them were red and the roofs were black. Detective Drew parked on the side of the number 15. That was the house where The parents lived.

    " Rainy day, huh?" Kay put on her yellow coat, and flipped the hood over her head. Weird, to put a bright color on a dull day.

    " Yup." That was all Drew can say. He didn't like small talk.

    Kay knocked on the white painted door. A women with mid back length brunnet hair, hazel hazel eyes and perfect cheekbones answered the door.

    " Can I help you?" she said, a handkerchief in her hand.

    " Yes, we're C.D.S, miss. Your daughter was found dead, in a ditch. Her car exploded." Drew said.

    " Yes........I know. Your chief, I think his name was Gallow? If yes, he went over here and told the news...."

    " Well, did he ask you any questions?"

    " no, he said a couple of detective will come over here, and here you are."

    " May we come in your house?"

    " Ok..."

    They went inside, rubbing their shoes on the mat. In the house, they had a mirror on the right side of them. It was square with a black frame. Mrs. Moore brought them to the living room which was farther on the left. It had a flat screen TV on the left side of the room. And a couch right in front of it. Behind the couch was a coffee table and a few seats. They were all wood, and were really smooth. They sat down on them.

    " Ok...we'll ask you some questions, and we'll check the house, is that all right with you?" Drew took out his notebook, and flipped through the pages.

    " Yes detective, but first, can my husband come in the room?"

    " anything you like Mrs. Moore!"

    " SETH! PLEASE COME IN THE LIVING ROOM!" she shouted.

    A man walked in the room, he had brown hair, which was combed, ocean blue eyes and was wearing jeans, a green top and his slippers.

    " Yes honey?" Seth said, giving a quick kiss on the cheek. They were in there 30's.

    " Two detectives want to ask us some questions." Mrs Moore said.

    " I haven't got your name yet! Sorry for that! My name is Drew and this is Kay!"

    " Hi!" Kay bowed her head.

    " my name is Jenny!"

    " Ok Jenny, where were both of you two days ago?"

    " We were at home!" Seth said.

    " You don't seem sad at all." Drew said suspiciously.

    " Well....we try not to remember...it will only make it worse.."

    " Hm, ok, What was Leah doing at night alone?"

    " She said she was going to a party."

    " Who's party?"

    " She didn't say. But the weird thing is that....she......she doesn't have friends.."

    " and why is that?"

    " I'm not sure detective.."

    " She told you that?" Jenny said. " She told me she was going to a library!"

    " Hm.....ok, we'll look around the house if you wouldn't mind."

    " Knock yourself out!" Seth said, giving a friendly punch on the arm. Drew and Kay checked Leah's room. They looked at a note in Leah's drawer. It read

    ' Meet me at the ditch and I will return your precious Jewellery, and bring me my 10k dollars.'

    " Hm, maybe she went to the ditch, ran out of gas that moment and went to get gas. Then the murderer put a bomb in the car...." Kay said, holding the note.

    " Yes, but we need to know who it is.."

    They looked around the room again and found liquor under her bed.

    " Now I believe someone is haunting me... Its the same every time.." Drew said, taking a deep breath.

    " It says Jimbo's"

    " ok, put that in your evidence bag, we'll check that bar out later. They investigated the room and went through all the rooms. And nothing suspicious standee out in Seth and Jenny's room. They came back to them and asked them one more question.

    " Excuse me Mr. Moore, we found a bottle of beer under Leah's bed, explain how that ended up there?"

    " LEAH HAS BEEN DRINKING??????" Seth shouted, slamming his two hands on the coffee table.

    " Calm down Seth."

    " ok detective.." he calmed and breathed heavy. " I d'know detective..."

    " Ok....thank you Mr and Mrs Moore, we'll be going" Drew and Kay stood up and went to the black Mazda, before they could come out it was rainy. Oh, and there was a gangster trying to steal the Mazda!

    " HEY!" Drew shouted, running to the gangster.

    The gangster turned around and it was a girl with a plain black t-shirt and striped black and gray sleeves. Black skinny jeans and knee high sneakers. She looked like she had short pixie cut with blue streaks and had Original blonde hair.

    " YO! THE NAME'S SALLY!" Sally pushed Drew back.

    " Look, I dont punch girls."

    " I do!" Kay said giving Sally a swing, Sally fell over. She stood up and wiped the blood off her mouth.

    They ran to each other, fists ready.

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  12. Mwahaha! I'm evil as hell!
     
  13. And a tough bitch!
     
  14. OMG! I MEANT ROGUE INSTEAD OF SALLY!!!! IM SO SORRY!!