Detective. Drew

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. It's been like how many days so if I were you, I'd read the first and second chapter again.. (if you forgot what happened.)
     
  2. Detective. Drew CHAPTER 3 - Switch of plans?

    The truck went to back gardens of houses, destroying the fences. The black Mazda roared again and it went close to the truck. The car smashed into the side of it, making the truck scrape on the wall. It made sparks. The truck did the same making more damage then the truck itself. It stopped smashing the car and tried escaping. It did, but Drew wouldn't give up. It roared once more and it was catching up to The truck. The truck took a drifting left while leaving drew crashing to a tree.

    " Damn.." he said hitting the steering wheel.

    " I love your driving skills!" Kay said sarcastically.

    " Shut up."

    " Great! He's out of sight, what do we do?!"

    " We wait......"

    ".................."

    "............"

    "..............BORED......."

    " all right I'll call for a lift.."

    HOURS LATER.. meanwhile in the California detective station..

    " Drew!" Gallow said, face turning red.

    " yes sir?"

    " You LET a suspect escape???"

    " ......no......."

    " I know you did Drew, for that after this case your new desk is traffic cases!"

    " What?!? But that sucks! It's the most boring job to do!"

    " Well after wrecking most parts of police property in your car you also have been suspended from work....for a week.."

    " Oh c'mon!"

    " I'm sorry drew, but Detective Kaylee will have a NEW partner."

    " Who?"

    " our best detective in this job of course! Detective Isaac! "

    " Hello gentlemen.." Isaac said coming in Gallow's office.

    " Well hello there detective Isaac!" Gallow said with a smile.

    Isaac had brown short hair, green eyes and his shoulders were broad.

    " Sup.." Drew said

    " um...Sup.....?" Isaac said confused.

    " Well I'm going home then.."

    " ok, goodbye Detective Drew."

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    Detective Isaac CHAPTER 1 - THE ONLY CHAPTER.

    Detective Isaac and Kaylee went down to Isaac's mini.

    " You can call me Kay, Isaac.."

    " Ok, Kay."

    " Hahaha! That rhymed!"

    " No time for silliness, we have to track down Drake Berck."

    They went in the white mini driving to Mister Eagle's House. They were there, they got out and Kay just realized Isaac wore a suit. Isaac knocked on the door, he waited a few seconds and no one answered.

    " No one's home.." he said

    " Drew thought me if your in a rush, just simply break-in."

    " Well, Drew is suspended and IM your partner now!" he grinned. " but there's no other way so I'll just do that I guess."

    He took a few steps back, and he ran to the door stomping it down.

    " Nice job."

    " Thanks."

    " Well ok let's investigate his house if he's the killer.."

    " There's a 45% chance he is..."

    They looked everywhere but no clues. They went outside looking out there. Then Mister Eagle walked home seeing them.

    " HEY! COME OVER ' ERE!"

    Isaac came over there and asked

    " Yes mister E-

    Mister Eagle gave Isaac an uppercut. He fell, blood forming on his chin. He got up and gave Mister Eagle a punch on the temple. He was mad and gave multiple punches on the stomach, Isaac fell. Mister Eagle was about to stomp on his face but before he could Kay was aiming her gun on Mister Eagle's head.

    " Stop what your doing and put your hands in the air." Kay threatened him

    He did and asked,

    " What are you doing here?!?"

    " We're looking for clues if your the killer.."

    " What? Why would I kill my own daughter!"

    " We're just checking, we aren't sure if your the killer." she said, still pointing the pistol at him. " but you aren't the killer, no evidence was found."

    " So can I go now? But your going to pay for my door!!"

    " We will pay for all damage, Mister Eagle.."

    He left, going in his broken-door house.

    " Wow! You suck at fightin!" Kay laughed

    " Whatever.." Isaac mumbled, struggling to get up. " Next stop, Seth Walker's House!"

    Isaac barely got up, they entered the mini but Kay drove because Detective Isaac had to hold his chin with a tissue. Seth's house was near a forest behind California High.

    " Nice place.." Kay was amazed.

    It was a wooden house, three storey's high. And vines swinging from the wooden-log roof.

    " did he make this house or something? " Kay said, " he lives by himself and could make that??"

    " yup.." Isaac mumbled again.

    They went inside and Kay smashed down the door with her foot.

    " I check his room, you check the living room." Kay ran to his room. She looked under his bed, inside drawers and when she checked the last thing to look at which was his coat rack she found a bloody knife in one of his coat pockets.

    " Isaac come over here.."

    He did and he was holding a blood stained jacket.

    " I found this!"

    " Well I'll get the evidence bag."

    They put the evidence in the bag and went to drive back in the C.D.S to interrogate Seth again. A few minutes they got there and they went in to interrogation room 1.

    " Hello Seth." Isaac said, his bloody chin was alright but it was making a scab.

    " Um, Isn't Drew suppose to interrogate me? And what happened to your chin?"

    " Drew is suspended from his duties-

    " Haha! Duties.."

    " Please stop interrupting me, and my chin, I got into a fight.."

    " And you got beat up?"

    " um......enough of this! Here's my first question.." Isaac took out his notebook and looked at the first question. " Detective Kay and I found a bloody knife and T-shirt...explain why you have those?"

    " Um.....I don't know what're you talkin 'bout.." Seth said. He had a drop of sweat running down his temple. He was tapping his fingers together, he does that when he's nervous.

    " Don't you lie to me! We have full proof evidence and we know your the killer!

    "....."

    " Exactly.... Now tell me....why did you do it?"

    "......."

    " Still silent huh? Ok, we can do this the hard way or the easy way. You pick."

    "......e........easy way....."

    " ok.....answer my question."

    "......."

    Isaac gave a slap across the cheek of Seth.

    " OW! I thought you this was the easy way!" he said, rubbing his cheek. It was red and he was almost crying.

    " It IS the easy way! NOW ANSWER MY DAMN QUESTION!"

    " Ok...but someone sent me...to kill her...."

    " who?"

    " he's a relative of mine and if I tell anyone he'll look for me.. That's all I can say.."

    " so it's a he..."

    " Uh huh.."

    " Ok....bu-

    Just then, Chief Gallow came storming in the room.

    " Hello mister Gallow!" Isaac said, bowing his head.

    " Hi Detective Isaac....I'm sorry but I changed my mind.."

    " of what?"

    " Drew......is not suspended anymore.." he said " He's too valuable to let go of...plus he bribed me a 3 pack of doughnuts.."

    " YES!!!" Seth said jumping out of the chair.

    " SIT DOWN! " Isaac shouted, he did.

    " Since it's his last case in his desk he'll replace you.....for today...."

    " But what about Kay?"

    " She's coming with me.." Drew said coming in.

    " You can't do this!"

    " I'm sorry Isaac!" Gallow said, pleading him.

    " NO! I QUIT!" He said, then he got out his pistol and shot Gallow. Then drew took out his gun and shot Isaac on the shoulder. He dropped, he was unconscious but was still alive.

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    DETECTIVE DREW CHAPTER 3 - THE SAME CHAPTER

    " Well...that's over.." Drew said

    " Yup " Kay said patting his shoulder. " I'll go check on Chief."

    " ok, Now Seth, tell me who it is and we'll protect you!"

    " ok....it's that guy y'know, Drake Berck?"

    " I knew it!" he said, grabbing Seth. " Let's go find that *bleep."

    They went in the black Mazda, it was now repaired. Detective Drew was going to O'Carl bar for more questions but Drew got a phone call.

    " Detective Drew, who is speaking?"

    " It's me Luke? Yeah we found Drake's truck."

    " Where??"

    " California High.."

    " We're coming.."

    They drove off and they saw police cars everywhere, students running out of the school and people crowding.

    " Why the hell did he pick this place to go?" drew asked. Pistol in his hand.

    " He told me that if the cops know, he gonna steal some students and attach them to a bomb.." Seth said looking at the students running.

    " ATTACH A WHAT??" Kay said.

    " A BOMB! CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW??" he shouted.

    " I know that..."

    " We better go now." Drew opened the car door and met up with Luke.

    " Hey detectives.....and kid.." he said

    " Do you know the students who's strapped on the bomb?"

    " Yeah! It's Emma Cahn, China Low and Mickayla Young, why?"

    " Hell no.."

    " Oh yeah! And he's got goons in the school.

    " WHAT?!?"

    " Don't worry, we'll send some of ours with you in there!"

    " ok. You keep Seth with you."

    They got the cops straight away. They brought 3 cops with them making it 5. They knew Drake had more than 5 goons. They had their guns ready and were running in the school.

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  4. A LITTLE PREVIEW OF CHAPTER 4

    They all spread out. Drew checked the gym, it was empty and quiet. So he shot the ceiling to get attention in the room, he did, it was two guys with shotguns hiding behind those dodgeball carts. Drew took cover behind one too. He heard three shots fired and he took his chance and tried to shoot one on the head, he missed and took cover again. One of them ran to him and drew dodged him avoiding being tackled. He fell and tried to get up an Drew shot him in the head. The other one had the chance but he had missed him wildly and hit the light. Drew shot four times and reloaded.the goon retreated.

    " You better run!" He shouted

    He ran after him, the goon tried to shoot him but missed. He went left and stayed there. Drew turned left and the goon tackled him.drew put his pistol down and put his fists up. So did the goon.
     
  5.  thanks!
     
  6. EVEN BIGGER IMPROVEMENTS

    ILL BE POSTING A CHAPTER AS OFTEN AS I CAN!

    SO HERE'S CHAPTER 4 
     
  7. DETECTIVE DREW CHAPTER 4 - THE LAST CASE FOR DREW

    They all spread out. Drew checked the gym, it was empty and quiet. So he shot the ceiling to get attention in the room, he did, it was two guys with shotguns hiding behind those dodgeball carts. Drew took cover behind one too. He heard three shots fired and he took his chance and tried to shoot one on the head, he missed and took cover again. One of them ran to him and drew dodged him avoiding being tackled. He fell and tried to get up an Drew shot him in the head. The other one had the chance but he had missed him wildly and hit the light. Drew shot four times and reloaded.the goon retreated.

    " You better run!" He shouted

    He ran after him, the goon tried to shoot him but missed. He went left and stayed there. Drew turned left and the goon tackled him.drew put his pistol down and put his fists up. So did the goon.

    " Ready to be b-

    The goon kicked his stomach, Drew still stood and he punched him five times on each jaw. The goon grabbed his neck and choked him, he lifted Drew off his feet. Drew spat in his face and he got blinded. Drew kicked him in the groin, the goon fell on the ground, Drew got his gun and shot it in his groin. Drew checked English class. That was when Drew met Seth. He saw a goon pop out from the teacher's desk, he had an m4. He shot Drew on the left arm.

    " AH! " He cried.

    Luckily he was a right hander. He shot the goon on the stomach, then the arm and then the head. Another one came in the room and shot Drew on the back. He fell and he saw a blur of the goon. Then Kay came in the room and stabbed the goon on the shoulder. He fell next to Drew.

    " Stay here." Kay said

    Kay went with one cop in Math class. A goon shot the cop from the desk and the cop dropped. Kay got her pistol and shot him right in the left eye. He struggled standing up and fell backwards into the window. She ran trying to find Drake. She went into German and saw Isaac Stabbing a cop, he had still got the bloody shoulder and he saw her, Isaac took the gun from the cop and Tried to shoot her, she ran and went into a room, hiding.

    " Come out, come out," he began " Kay, c'mon partner! All I want to do is kill ya!"

    Kay came out of nowhere and tackled Isaac to the wall, she punched him.

    " You can punch me all you want-

    " Oh good!" Kay said punching him on the cheek.

    He rubbed his cheek. " But you can NEVER kill me!"

    Kay got out her pistol and shot him. " Your dead."

    Blood came running down on Isaac's mouth. Kay went to look for Drake again. She thought he would be in the highest point of the school, so she checked. In one room there was screaming, she knew it was the right room. She kicked open the door and shouted

    " FREEZE! PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR WHERE I CAN SEE THEM!!"

    She saw China, Emma and Mickayla screaming 'help'

    " Why, hello there.." Drake said, approaching her.

    " Stay away from the girls and put your hands up!"

    Drake did put his hands up and in his left hand he had a black controller with a big red button on the middle.

    " Or what?" he said

    " Or I shoot you."

    " If you dare, I will press this button and we all die!" Drake smirked, then laughed...an evil laugh.

    " Why are you doing this? "

    " Well," he began. " That stupid *beep luka refused to make out with me!"

    " But your old!" Kay said still pointing the gun on him.

    " That's it' I'm gonna pr-

    " Wait! What do you want??"

    " A kiss." drake grinned.

    " please not from me!" Kay thought

    " From you! "

    " Damn..."

    Kay went close to him, then she was about to do it then she kicked his hand, making the controller fall. Drake fell, reaching for the controller, then Kay kicked his stomach. She got the remote and held it, she went over to the bomb and there was two wires. A , and a . She thought " Damn, I had enough of these bomb wires from movies!!" then she panicked trying to cut the green wire that she took from the table. She cut it.....she closed her eyes sweating.....nothing happened.

    " YES! I DID IT!" just then Drake held a gun from his pocket.

    " Prepare to di-

    Then he got shot in the back......by Seth.

    " Seth! " Kay said hugging him.

    A FEW HOURS LATER

    Drew lay down on the hospital bed. Kay stayed there to keep him accompanied.

    " You did it kiddo..." Drew said, faintly.

    " I know.."

    " It'll probably take me weeks to recover...so I'm gonna nap.."

    " Ok." Kay laughed.

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    Detective Drew.

    There'll be a second case, It'll come out as soon as I've finished the sign up cast!
     
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  9. Lol that's what you said last time! Lololololololololololollipop
     
  10. Well thts all I can say it's so great!
     
  11. Lol cool!
     
  12. Lol I'm going to take a nap....


    Awesome story.