Detective. Drew

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. I'm liking it so far...
     
  2. CHAPTER 2 WILL COME AT SATURDAY
     
  3. ill be at my friends house but she has wifi!! :D
     
  4. Ok, great
     
  5. I really need this thread slice so I'll bump it..



























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  6. Detective. Drew chapter 2 - INTERROGATION

    California high was a tall and wide school, students walked everywhere and were bunched together. Detective Drew and Kaylee walked pasted the hallway, students looked at them with curiousness. They heard little talk about them. They went into the principal's office.

    " detective Drew and this is detective Kaylee, we're C.D.S." Drew said walking to the principal showing his badge.

    " Principal. Lee." he said

    " we got word that Luka, Eagle is dead.."

    " excuse me?"

    " she's dead...drew said it loud and clear! Couldn't you hear that??" Kay said

    " I did ms. Kaylee, but when?"

    " last night, in the streets.."

    " we need clues mr. Lee." drew said, in a rush. " Do you know any friends of Luka?"

    " Why yes I do, China Low, Laurel Ann, Mickayla young and Emma Cahn."

    Do you know where they are?"

    " I'd say there're in English class! In room 44"

    " thank you principal. Lee."

    " No problem detectives, I'll keep touch!"

    They went into room 44 and Drew whispered to the teacher

    " do you know laurel, Emma, china and Mickayla ?"

    "Yes I do" she whispered " there right over there " she pointed to four of them and the girls were in scared mode. There eyes widened when they approached them.

    " Do you know a Luka Eagle?" Kay said

    " yeah...why?" Emma said tapping her finger on the table.

    " She was found dead last night..."

    " Oh my God!!" Laurel said, tear in her eyes.

    " Don't worry it'll be all right.. She's in a better place now.."

    " who would've done such a thing!" Mickayla said

    " were still figuring out who it is girls..ok?"

    " ok...but promise us this.....punish the killer.." China said , with an angry face.

    " we can't do that but there'll be severe consequences..an-

    Just then a baseball smashed through the window. Every student hid beneath there desks, while the detectives got out their pistols. They went outside seeing what happened. A student ran into the streets. Drew ran after him. Drew shouted to Kaylee

    " go get the car and follow him! "

    " OK!" she shouted as she ran to the black Mazda.

    The student went to doge every car while they beeped. He jumped from fences to walls. They were now in an alley way.

    " YOU'LL NEVER CATCH ME COPPER!!" The student said.

    Just then the black Mazda pulled right in front of the student.

    " Damn.." he said

    " what was that you said?" Drew said laughing.

    " This is detective Drew, and I'm detective Kaylee.."

    " well, HELL-OO hot stuff.." the student said rubbing his hands.

    " what's your name hot-shot?" Drew said pushing him.

    " Billy bob baggins.." he said chuckling.

    " don't make me shoot you!" Drew said angrily, pointing the Black pistol at the student

    " ok...Seth walker, happy now copper?" Seth said

    " stop calling me that. " Drew said. " Detective kaylee, you go tell Mister eagle about the bad news, I'll take care of this kid."

    She walked to the Mazda opening it and getting inside. She drove to the Eagle residence.

    " so Seth.... would you like to get some ice-cream?" drew said with a smirk

    " YEAH!"

    " well your not getting any.."

    " Damn.."

    "But you can have-

    " What? A car? money? A Justin beiber doll.." Seth said whispering out the last bit.

    " A what doll?"

    " oh nothing.." his head drooped.

    " you can have AN ITERRIGATION! "

    " fine..."

    " let's have a healthy walk to the Detective station, ok?"

    " but I'm tir-

    " Sh, sh, lets go walk now."

    " STOP IT! STOP IT! NOO! YOUR PUNISHING ME! Stop nooooooo!" he said trying to release from Drew's grip.

    " Lazy.." Drew thought.

    They finally reached the detective station and Seth was filled with sweat, he was sleepy and was about to faint. They took a few minutes before they interrogate. They went into interrogation room 1, and they took a seat.

    " So....Seth, do you know luka Eagle??" drew said making a fist on the table.

    " no...who's luka?" Seth said raising an eyebrow.

    " Well, she was found dead last night...AND I WANT ANSWERS!"

    " ok,ok, ask me.."

    " do you know Luka?"

    " yeah, we're good friends..we go out to drink sometimes, but we didn't drink last night.."

    Drew wrote down what he said in his notebook. He asked the next question.

    " by the way, you shouldn't be drinking,.. Ok, tell me wh-

    Just then, he got phone call from Kay.

    " what is it?" Drew said

    " mister eagle said that Seth Walker and Luka were rivals in school, they used to prank each other and Seth snapped at Luka's last prank. So maybe he murdered her!"

    " Hmm.. Ok call me back if you have more answers."

    He hung up and he picked up his pistol and he waved it in the air.

    " your lying to me Seth.." he said " you were rivals with Luka AND IF YOU DON'T TELL ME THE TRUTH I WILL SHOOT!"

    " fine.."

    " Were you actually in the bar with Luka?"

    " well, I was their drinking and she was there.."

    " then......?"

    " we didn't talk much..actually we didn't talk..I saw a few men flirting with her though.."

    " anything else?"

    " no.."

    " Ok, I'll be going, Luke (policeman) go get Seth a cosy cell!"

    " yes detective.." he said.

    He walked away, putting his pistol in his holster. Chief Gallow was there waiting for an answer.

    " Well drew? Was he the killer?"

    " We're not sure, he said that he saw her being flirted by men in the bar." drew said. " the shattered bottle doesn't have a label what bar it is though"

    " Then get to it lad! Go find what bar it is.."

    He went to the phone by the exit. He called the operator.

    " Detective Drew, badge 1313. I need an address for what bar Luka went to.."

    " let me see detective.... O'Carl Bar is the place."

    " thank you."

    He went outside and Kay was there waiting in the black Mazda.

    " we're going to a bar.." Drew said, going inside the car.

    " To drink? Dang, I should of brought my shot!"

    " do you really think we're gonna drink and party all night?"

    " Yeah.........?"

    " well we're not.....I hate having a partner.."

    " you know I can hear!"

    " yeah, I know.."

    They drove to O'Carl bar. It was all black and the paint was filled with cracks. They went inside and the Bartender asked

    " you want a drink detectives?"

    Drew said " no we're fine..do you Know a Luka Eagle?"

    " yeah..."

    " she was murdered yesterday mister.....?"

    " Carl!"

    " so your the owner. Do you know any men who was flirting with her?"

    " yeah! But it was only one guy. Drake Berck. He's a usual here. He over there with the red top."

    " thanks.."

    Detective Drew and Kaylee went over to Drake and shouted " C.D.S! WE NEED A TALK WITH YOU!"

    Drake ran out of the bar. He went to his truck and drove.

    " C'mon!" drew shouted as he went into his Black Mazda. The engine roared and it chased the truck.

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    CHAPTER 3 COMING SOON

    P.S, P.R will mean something in the future cases I'll make ( other stories )
     
  7. Wootmore
     
  8.  did u put in two mes?
     
  9. Who are the two you's? Lol
     
  10. Me like but what's really weird there is this kid named Seth that I am rivals with! please don't be a sign. oh and I avsoulutly love la noire. I've been obbssed in playing it recently!
     
  11.  Drew aprooves
     
  12. DETECTIVE DREW CHAPTER 3 COMES OUT FRIDAY
     
  13. 
     
  14. OFFICIAL PREVIEW OF CHAPTER 3 the reason why it'll be out on Friday is because it'll be long!

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    The truck went to back gardens of houses, destroying the fences. The black Mazda roared again and it went close to the truck. The car smashed into the side of it, making the truck scrape on the wall. It made sparks. The truck did the same making more damage then the truck itself. It stopped smashing the car and tried escaping. It did, but Drew wouldn't give up. It roared once more and it was catching up to The truck. The truck took a drifting left while leaving drew crashing to a tree.
     
  15. Cool cool cool! I can't wait!