Detective. Drew

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. I'll post next update tomorrow!
     
  2. Detective Drew 2

    He jumped, closing his eyes, all the dirt on the ground cut his flesh. And ' this was supposed to happen' He did exactly what he did, land on his shoulders, roll over, get up, run.

    " CUT! " The director began. " Excellent Drew! But next time, actually hurt yourself!"

    He was hurt. He would like to punch his Ugly face right now but wouldn't.

    " Nice job.." Werd said, passing him.

    " I'm outta here.." Drew said.

    He kicked the door open and went to the hospital. He promised Kay he would come for her everyday.

    " AAAAAAHHH!!" A woman screamed behind her, a man wearing black clothes and a mask stole her purse, he ran the opposite direction from Drew. He ran after the robber, the man in black pushed everyone in his way, while Drew was just dodging them.

    " Stop!" Drew shouted. The robber ran to the other side of the city. He ran after him, but a Green Truck drove in front of him.

    " Damn"

    He realized that the robber climbed up a small building. He ran to him when cars weren't in front of him. He went inside the building and took the stairs up the roof.

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    Sorry it's a bit short! I was focused on making my Halloween story!
     
  3. Bump Bump Bump bump Bump Bump bump Bump Bump Bump BumpSexy Lexi Is Out lol
     
  4. Should I continue this AMAZING story? 
     
  5. I never noticed how bad I wrote..
     
  6. >.> Just remake it. :D
     
  7. I will......... Later on in the day!!
     
  8. Meh.. Too tired I'll try starting a new short case.
     
  9. DETECTIVE DREW RETURNS 

     There were sweet sound of birds chirping above him while Detective Drew read through the next case he had to do. On the bench out on the local playground, he flipped through pages on the reports. Until he stumbled upon the summary of the case.

    " A horrible accident happened when a young man still attending college, pranked his friend and went all wrong. That is all the facts the California Detective Station knows." Drew said to himself, word by word.

    Nothing much changed about him. Just the fact that now he wears gray now instead of black. In front of him, were three brothers, playing on the monkey bars. Each one of them fell off after the first bar. The older one looked 10, the middle child looked 8 and the youngest looked 7. Just then, Detective Kay appeared in his vision ruining his train of thought.

    " Finished reading the report? " she said impatiently.

    " Yeah.... It was an April Fools prank, a teen, decided to prank his friend and it went all wrong! Great isn't it?! "

    " How did it all go wrong? "

    " That's the part where our jobs come into play, Kay! Do you know what we do? "

    " I'm not stupid! We solve cases! Catch bad guys! And so on. "

    " I've never liked Detective Partners! "

    " well, tough luck isn't it Drew? "

    " Shut up and lets get to my car... "

    They both walked towards the car not saying a single word after the little conversation. Drew's Mazda was still pitch black and it would be good for car chases at night.

    " The facts I read were... That he attended wasssss... California University, but how the people who go to that school like to call it, ' PimD '. "

    " and what is that?? "

    " I don't know, it's something to do with dorms... "

    It was 3 o' clock so the streets were filled. It took the Mazda a quarter of an hour to escape the traffic jam. It didn't take that long to find PimD. It was a big building with the sign ' California University '.

    They hopped out of the car, locked it, walked to the entrance and opened the door. There were classrooms as well as Dorms. Nerds were talking among themselves about Math, Goth people smoked with knowing you weren't supposed to, indoors. And party animals yelling

    " CHUG! CHUG! CHUG! CHUG! "

    Just then a Sleazy girl walked up in front of Drew, her teeth softly biting her finger. She wore a really tight vest and short shorts. Her blonde hair was perfectly combed. That's what Drew noticed anyway.

    " Hey there, Sexy. " The Sleazy Girl said.

    " Um... Hi? "

    " my name's Lauryn... Heres my number. " She took out a pen from her short shorts pocket and wrote an 11 digit phone number. and handed the small piece of paper to him.

    " Um... Thanks? " Drew was feeling awkward.

    Suddenly, a Wrestler dude, still wearing his outfit stepped in front of Lauryn.

    " HEY! THAT'S MY GIRLFRIEND GEEZER! YOU BETTER RUN NOW OR THERES HELL TO PAY! " The wrestler shouted.

    " Hey, hold your horses Adrian! " a Fraternity president pushed him aside and introduced himself to Kay instead of Drew.

    " Hello Darlin' " the fraternity president said.










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    I'LL BE UPDATING LATER ON IN THE DAY.
     
  10. Told you I'd read it 

    Bump!
     
  11. Haha lmao