 One Final Case 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by i_am_ironman_, Sep 27, 2013.

  1. Thanks for attacking me Tiger, really just shows how much of a child you are.


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  2. tiger can be my lawyer someday <33
     
  3. Fear not kitten, for I am awesome, my awesomeness will dazzle all.
     
  4. Oh I'm a child for hitting you on a battle game? That makes a whole lotta sense.
     
  5. Your childish for hitting me over a comment about you leaving Iron alone.

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  6.  update 


    I heard one of the cars stop near my house and the others continued by. There was a knock at the door and I knew who it was going to be. As I walked towards the door I was debating mentioning the phone call but I decided against it.

    I opened the door and the officer started talking. "Jim you won't believe what happened! Tony Miller, our investigator for the on going murders by Nick Gregory just got killed!"

    "What??" I responded already knowing that he would be dead soon.

    "Yea!" He confirmed. "He was found dead in the park fountain, the captain would like you to come with me to check out the scene" he continued"

    "Alright, let me get my jacket and tools" as I invited him in and started gathering my things.

    It was 11:17 now and I was tired as I got in the car to go to the crime scene. I was happy when the officer handed me a cup of coffee so I could stay up. It was a 13minute drive to the park so I started questioning the officer.

    "What do you know about the murders so far?" I asked.

    "Not much, only that this psycho seems to like fingers and always keeps one from those he kills."

    "So I've heard, I've read five cases so far and they all ended that way."

    By now, we reached the park and we stepped out to a crowd of people already gathered and yellow police tape separating them from the police on scene.

    "Police clear a path" the officer said, and everyone moved a little as we walked towards the fountain. As we got past the line of officers and up to the fountain, I couldn't believe my eyes.


    The fountain was red, blood red and the figure impaled on the top just made it even worse. The fountain kept on recirculating the red water, turning it darker as the police and fire department tried to get the body down.

    I figured I'd be standing around for a while, I went and tries to locate the person who called in the murder. I finally found the woman. She was off to the side crying silently to herself as two men and another woman tried to calm her down.

    "Hello, I'm Jim Caraway, I'm investigating this murder and I understand you saw what happened?" I questioned as I approached.

    "Yes" she replied. "I saw the entire thing."

    " Could you tell me what happened? It helps you forget if you tell someone who you know will put the murderer behind bars." I said as soothingly as possible.

    "Alright, I was walking though the park on my way home from work when I heard a loud noise above my head. I looked up and saw a helicopter flying really close to the trees, then the next thing I knew it started to hover above the fountain and something fell out. I ran towards it because I was curious, and as soon as i reached the fountain...."

    "Go on it's alright," I said trying to motivate her to continue.

    ".... A body.. That body" she pointed towards the body now free from the fountain. "it landed directly on the point and immediately the water turned red and i stumbled backwards falling onto a bench. After a while the helicopter flew away and I called 911."

    "Thank you for explaining it to me," I said smiling. "I'll find the person who did this." Just as i finished, the office who brought me here came and told me I could now inspect the body and crime scene.

    As I walked back and started to inspect the body I found a note in the blood stained pocked of Tony Miller, but not the 4th finger on the left hand
     
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY IRO!!!!! 