The Lobster Gang

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *madelinnicoledavis (01), Jan 19, 2013.

  1. yea but I ran out o creative juice
     
  2.  I am now officially second. Boo-yah!
     
  3. haha argh! Some ppl I didn't even to know today was making fun of me cause I was wearing my country stuff but I don't know why cause they r country to!! I almost turned around and slapped the dudes! It's a good thing I've been learning how to control my anger and stay emotionless and silent like I didn't notice haha they might have been mad when I randomly slapped them
     
  4. U said u had three paragraphs
     
  5. CHLOE P.O.V

    We walked into the apartment laughing, for the desk lady thought it wasn't right that I was riding piggy back on Ben.

    We were still laughing, not knowing the danger in front of us until it was to late.

    "Hello hello! Oh I missed you Clo! I am so sorry that we had to meet this way but as your boss I shall not leave you unpunished," a dark voice said loud and boldly.

    I gasped as I fell back onto the wall as though I depended on it for my life.

    "Don't be scared Chloe! It will just hurt a little," the boss smirked.

    "HOW DARE YOU?! YOU COME INTO MY HOUSE AND TRY TO KILL THIS GIRL WHO HAS JUST HAD HER HEARTBROKEN? WHAT IS WRONG WITH Y'ALL? I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU CALL YOURSELF A MAN! DO YOU KILL GIRLS EVERYDAY OR IS IT THE FIRST TIME YOU SICKO," Ben screamed at him.

    "I won't kill her until I get what I want from her," he smirked.

    "WHAT?! OHHHH NO! THAT'S NOT HAPPENING!"

    "Boys, please escort Ben out while I handle some business."

    "NO LET ME GO! PLEASE! SPARE HER! WHAT DID SHE EVER DO TO YOU?! LET ME GO," Ben yelled more outraged then ever as the twins smirked carrying him out.

    "Now hold still and lets get this over with. I'm sure you will enjoy it," the boss said locking the door and walking over to me.

    I was petrified and couldn't move. How could I move? He might have a gun or a knife!

    Then my arms were pinned up against the wall, above my head.

    He then put his mouth by my ear and whispered"You better enjoy this while it lasts bitch," sending shivers down my spine.

    That's all I remembered before I blacked out.

    BEN P.O.V

    I heard her screams but could do nothing to help. I was trapped. After several hours I heard a gunshot and the boss walked out smirking.

    The twins let me go and I ran in, calling 911. She was shivering as blood was all over her.

    "Ben, remember that I deserved this. I should have never tested the power of my dad. Its all my fault," she whispered before closing her eyes.

    "No it's not Clo! Don't die! Please! You can't," I cried as the ambulance arrived and I followed them to the hospital.

    AT HOSPITAL

    Chloe was in a deep coma that she may never wake from. That's the bad thing. I knew her emotional state was bad but I had no idea her health was bad to. That's what made it last longer.

    I sat in a chair, holding her hand and staring at her. She looked peaceful but also sad. She thought this was her fault. Its not. It's my fault for thinking that the gang would accept me but they used me to get to her. I was so stupid.

    I sighed and looked at her once more. Suddenly the line went straight on the machine. No no no no no no no! She can't die!

    I quickly called a nurse and they rushed me out. I began to cry like never before.

    Suddenly a nurse came to me" She's alive! She is still in a comma but she's not dead!"

    I ran in and saw her breathing and gave a sigh of relief. Let's hope she awakes soon.

    TEN YEARS LATER

    I came and visited Chloe for the last time. They were going to end it today. She still hasn't awoken. I am going to let my wife and sons and daughter see her.

    My wife and kids patted and soothed me while I cried waiting. I couldn't help it though. She was everything to me. I couldn't help but cry.

    I walked into the room alone. I was going to get her to be my girlfriend that night she was shot. Now she is here about to die and I want to do one thing before she does.

    I walked over to her bed and whispered"Hey Clo. I know I come and see you everyday but this is going to be the last one. I love you so much."

    I leaned down and kissed her gently before whispering again"Remember you are not worthless. My first kiss with you and your about to die. Who would have thought? It wasn't your fault okay? Remember that."

    Then the doctors pushes me out and unplugged machines from her, a single tear went down my face.

    My wife and kids comforted me with no luck. I had to get rid of her though. I needed to move and that was what I was going to do my best to do.

    THE END
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    Sorry it was short or if you didn't like it! I am also sorry it took so long to update! Thanks for reading
     
  6. This was better than Clem's ending
     
  7. Merp heheheheHEHE
     
  8. Thankyou I have like to many ideas running around through my head so I don't know when my next story will be made but I'll try and post on here when it is
     
  9. Okay I decided on a idea and it's a little shirt but updates on it will get longer it will be called I am not a rag doll! Hope y'all will like it and thank you for reading my stories
     
  10. I meant short not shirt
     
  11. Merp
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  12. I think that's 136 dead dogs
     
  13. y were they killed
     
  14. I haven't killed in a long time how dare you question me!
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  15. agh! 
     
  16. Hehe I'm on a killing spree
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  17. Muhahahhahah
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