Allure

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Jul 16, 2012.

  1. So..much...green! Hit me with your best shot, Toxic,
     
  2. Would you continue it for me? 
     
  3. I don't care whatever freakin twist you have, I need help.
     
  4. Um..Maybe..Tell me the plot..IN PM.
     
  5. Mr.PriestBear


    Some spelling errors, 'tis all.
     
  6. 

    "Who are you?"my lips quivered at the thought of me talking to a bear. A bear?!

    The bear just gave me a cold stare, it's eyes menacing to make me be quiet, so I did what was asked.

    I was a lonely person, though I had the best redemptions of survival, I knew this land inch to inch, but never saw a bear as graceful and confusing as this one.

    It was brown, but it had black tips and the end of its fur, and it's arm seemed to contained some sort of birthmark, which puzzled me to move, causing a twig to crack, and the bears muzzle to growl.

    "Stay."he alarmed me.

    I hugged my knees, even tighter, trying to remain calm.

    Then the bear used is paw to write something in the earth, which made me think it was constructing a plan, but the way it circled, and it's hand motion, it was like a peaceful dance, but then the bears eyes blazed, light seeping into it, as I shielded my eyes.

    The marks in the solid earth lit up, and it was golden and the marks went into the sky, shooting.

    What had it just done?
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  8. This is awesome toxic update!