Royalty Role-Play Reborn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Salrion (01), Feb 6, 2012.

  1. (I don't wanna give you harsh criticism! )
     
  2. Alida

    -smiles at her amused-

    Well I guess you could have done worse! I'm happy for you!

    (awe but harsh critics help my work, just in a hurtful way )
     
  3. -Jumps happily-

    "Hes in my room!! Right now as we speak!!"

    -Presses finger to my lips-

    "Shhh Daddy doesn't know."

    -Giggles-
     
  4. *passes in and out of conciousness thinking about the princess/lily*
     
  5. Alida

    -looks at her in shock-

    Already getting busy on the bed?! Wow sis! Get some!

    -laughs loudly-
     
  6. "Alidaaa! Come and meet him please! You'll like him! Just come on!!"

    -Begs Alida-
     
  7. Alida

    Ok ok fine..

    -crosses arms with a smile-
     
  8. *wakes up with my back throbbing from the pain*
     
  9. Ari

    "It really is..."

    -Arrives at the castle-
     
  10. -Drags Alida up to my room leans against the door frame just watching him-
     
  11. Zack: *Is curiously looking around* Much larger than my own home...
     
  12. Alida

    -peeks in at him, making clear judgements of him in her head, smiles slightly-
     
  13. Janae

    -reads over the lines-

    Till ever lasting death..

    -closes the book, tiny tears in her eyes-
     
  14. Ari

    Where are you from?

    -Looks at him again-
     
  15. -Darts to his side seeing him in pain-

    "Tom... Are you okay? Would you like me to fetch the Medic?"

    -Places hand on his forehead checking his tempurature-
     
  16. Zack: I'm from Rabanstre... It's to the northwest... My brother and I came here to possible discuss a pact with this land, as we cannot defend against the threat of attack...
     
  17. Well… not many people would be ok after a being hit by a boar
     
  18. Ari

    Well you are welcome here.

    -Smiles, and enters the castle-