Lovestruck

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  2. Bump Angela! BUMP. 
     
  3. Thanks for all the bumps!

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    I stared at him in shock, tears prickling at the corner of my eye. As I watched them leave, and kiss again outside, those tears threatened to fall. The table next to me was looking at me in concern. But I didn't care. My heart was broken, shattering into tiny fragments, and that kiss just threw those fragments into the trash. I ran outside just in time to see them getting into their car, the tears streaming down my face. I collapsed on the ground, hugging myself and shaking. "Why?" I whispered. "I loved you… you told me you loved me. I thought… I just thought… we could stay together… we were perfect together."
    Just then, I felt a hand on my shoulder. "Are you okay?" A deep voice asked. "What happened?"
    I pointed at their car, then put my head down, sobbing. He sucked in a long breath. "****, that was your boyfriend, wasn't it? Kissing that girl?" I nodded.
    The boy sat next to me. As I glanced beside me, I saw that it was the guy who was staring at me. "I'm so sorry," He said. "He doesn't deserve someone as amazing as you. You should just forget about him. He's not worth it."
    "T-thanks," I hiccuped. "I'm Tina, by the way."
    "And I'm Chris."
    So now I knew his name.
    ~~~~~~~~Chris POV~~~~~~~~
    I was in love with Tina ever since I first saw her.
    ~~~ flashback ~~~
    I was sitting at a table in study hall, a few tables behind Tina. "Okay class, I have to go get something from my car," Mr. Hensworth, the study hall teacher announced. "I want everyone to study while I'm gone." Yeah right, like that would ever happen.
    As soon as he left, there was cacophony of noise. People started shouting across the room, engaging in random conversations with their friends. I was about to start talking to Will when I saw her.
    As she was talking to Ashley Summers, she flipped her silky brown hair, sending it cascading in a perfect curtain around her shoulders. That moment, I fell in love with Tina Layafette.
    I stood up to go talk to her, to get her to notice me. But as I was walking towards her, Trey came shooting out of nowhere and sat down next to her. "Heyyyy," he smirked. "I'm Trey. What's your name, gorgeous?"
    Tina turned her beautiful hazel eyes on him, fluttering her long lashes delicately. "I'm Tina," she smiled.
    When I saw that smirk, I knew that I hated him at once. He was going to break her heart, I could already predict that.
    ~~~ end of flashback ~~~
    When I found out that Trey was the one that was kissing that girl, I wanted to punch that ******* in the face so hard, he would go flying across the town.
    I comforted Tina as best as I could, and as I watched her leave I muttered, "You're going to pay, *******."
    ~~~~~~~~Tina's POV~~~~~~~~
    I strode to school with my heart hastily mended and a grim determination for revenge in my mind. In home room, I decided to just confront Trey. "I saw you," I hissed, Ashley glaring at him next to me. I had told her the story last night.
    "What?" Trey asked.
    "You know what," I replied. "You kissing that girl."
    "No, that wasn't-I didn't-Alexis forced me to! I was waiting at the restaurant for you, and she just came. She was all over me, kissing me, and I couldn't stop her. She says I'm her boyfriend but-"
    "You kissed back," I interrupted. "I saw you, don't deny it. And you leaned over and kissed her when you were leaving. You got in the same car.
    "But-"
    "Listen to me," Ashley snapped. "If you really are telling the truth, then you had two choices. One, to push her away and tell her you had a girlfriend. Two, to kiss her back and become her boyfriend. You chose option two."
    "Don't you get it?" I added. "We're over. WE. ARE. OVER. Get out of my life."

    ~~~~~~~~After School~~~~~~~~
    I stood at my locker, getting my books.
    "*****."
    "What?" I turned around. Oh no. It was Alexis. The richest, most popular girl in school.
    "You heard me." She growled. "*****. You stole my boyfriend. You made him break up with me. And no one breaks up with me. I only break up with them."
    "Well guess what? I broke up with him."
    "He said he loved you and not me! You're gonna pay for that, you *****!" Suddenly, Alexis punched me in the stomach, making my head bang against the locker.
    My vision was fading. Someone shouted "Tina! No!"
    The last thing I heard was footsteps pounding towards me.

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    Who do you think saves her? 

    Sorry for the swears 
     
  4. JeanGrey, I read your story and it's awesome 
     
  5. How do you change the color of your writing?
     
  6. Chris to the rescue
     
  7. So you think…
     
  8. Bum bum bummm

    I'm working on the next update now
     
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    ~~~~~~~~Tina's POV~~~~~~~~
    My vision swam. "Are you all right? Can you hear me, Tina?"
    "Urrrgh," I mumbled. I blinked a few times. I could see two heads in front of me that looked… the same? The heads spun around and came together. "Ashley?" I whispered. "You saved me?"
    Ashley sighed with relief. "Phew, you're okay! And no, I didn't save you. Someone else did, this guy. I was walking by when I saw him with you, and he asked me to take care of you. He had somewhere to be."
    Chris! I thought automatically. He must have saved me! As I stood up from the grass I had been laying on, I noticed Chris coming towards me.
    "Are you okay?" He asked.
    "Yeah, I am now. Alexis punched me, and I hit my head on my locker," I told that last part to Ashley. Then I noticed Chris was holding a football. "What's that football for?"
    "Oh, this? My football practice just ended. It starts right after school."
    "Wait, you didn't save me? I assumed you did…"
    He shrugged. "Like I said, football practice is right after school. I was there the whole time. But I would've, if I had known."

    Then who did save me?

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    Sorry it's really short
    And bad ):

    I'll update more later (or tomorrow)
     
  10. Corrections:
    I meant Ashley not Ashely
    And I forgot quotation marks in some places…
     
  11. Don't worry it's still good
     
  12. If you want to be a character, I need one or two mean girls
    Tell me what your name is, and what you look like
    Thanks 
     
  13. Is it worth it to post a little bit? Yeah, I'm probably going to forget his name if I don't post it… this is going to be really short