A Missing Puzzle Piece

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LCL_Mrs-Mouse (01), Jan 16, 2012.

  1. Seans version
    I couldn't take it I couldn't take none of it. Each word felt like a arrow stabbing me.
    I slammed back my chair In frustration.
    *slam*
    I punched the wall and stalked off my head cloudy.
    With every step I felt more pain ,all the pain of leaving her.
    She trusted me ,.....wait NO she trusted Cameron. I hate him I hated him with everything.
    I walked up to my mom staring at her cry on the bench.
    "it wasn't your fault about it mom"I said soothingly but her sobs didn't stop.
    I knew how she felt so guilty and wrong, the doctor came out smiling.
    He turned his head and I rushed in the room. There she was her eyes close humming this song. She taped her fingers in beat.

    I knew that song and for some weird reason I thought she was humming it to me.
    I started singing it badly"My hearts a stereo it beats for you so listen close"

    She peeked up at me"nice singing just beiber material"

    "hey you made it you alive"

    "nothing to be happy about"

    "stop it now stop talking like that"

    She stared at me in shock and disbelief. She was gonna blow it I knew it holy $hit what did I do.
     
  2. What do you guys think Denny should do
     
  3. Denise pov
    I stared at him shock feeling thru me, my blood boiled .
    Who the hell was he to tell me what to do.
    I felt like blowing up but this look in his eyes. His face all together stopped me.
    He had this soft caring look and my heart softened. I looked at him in defeat feeling tears come to my eyes.

    "fine"
    He looked at me and walked to my bed. He moved a strand of hair from my face.
    "someone as beautiful as you shouldn't talk like that"

    "is beauty all that matters"I said slitely bothered by what he said.

    "no with you it's so much more, the way you smile and not your fake smiles, but that rare smile that sends guys hearts flying.
    Or the way your laugh rings in my ears like a song.
    The way your like no other girl you know what you want your not afriad to be you, and you say what your thinking oh god trust me you have a big mouth. You being pretty,wait pretty Is a understatement,you being gorgeous is just icing on the cupcake"
    When he said that I felt the tears coming again.
    Did he really mean it I just couldn't believe it. I felt my heart beating in my chest my mind reeling. I watched Him carefully as he leaned down.

    I moved in, are lips barely touched when the door swung open.
    I looked angrily at the person responsible for ruining my moment.

    There stood Adam and Carter, looking at me uncomfortably.
    "sorry Brah,but we gotta go ma already made her way to the car"

    I got up and felt this dizziness come over me. I knew thinking this was wrong but it felt as if I was high.
    I wobbled a little Sean followed behind me ready to catch me. Finally I just leaned on Carter "carry me" I sang.

    I wasn't sure who was but whatever, I felt someone lift me with there strong arms. I looked to see Carter, he was so handsome and sexy.

    I looked at him and he glanced at me and smiled. My heart pounded, but surprisingly I wasn't nervous.

    I didn't know if it was the pain medication or what but I guess id find out.
     
  4. Bump!!!!!!!!
     
  5. Carters pov
    As I picked her up I realized how light she was. She looked up at me with these puppy eyes.

    These beautiful almost hazel, but what surprised me was earlier they were dark brown.
    This dark brown that looks like velvety dark chocolate.
    We walked in the car and she just laid in my arms.
    She was so lovable now I see why Sean liked her.
    When we got to her house she practically ran to the door. I couldn't figure out why but followed,I didn't care that Adam was calling me.
    I saw her drop to the floor sobbing this guy who had the same hair and eyes as her.
    His eyes were red and swollen
    "what happen"I asked

    "it's my grandadda I have to go back to the hospital"Cried Denny.
    I nodded my head and picked her up, but the guy took her from me. I was so confused I just didn't get it.
    Denny's pov
    As we got home I ran to the house, I felt stabs go thru my feet but I didn't care.
    I had to find my granddad,when I got in there was only one explanation of Mikey crying. Carter came running in I half expected the rest to run in but they probably just sent him in to check on us.
    I couldn't stop my tears he came to me and said in a quiet voice"what happen"

    "it's my grandadda I have to go back to the hospital"I cried.
    He picked me up in his arms which I don't know why but made me cry more.Mikey took me from him as we ran out.
    hospital 
    Denny's pov
    I was shaking by the time we were there I ran to the nurse and asked for the room. She mumbled 568 and I sprinted not jogged sprinted.
    Everyone followed after me, when I got there I saw my grandaddy there still as death.
    I hobbled to his bed stifling my sobs but it was hard.

    "grandaddy are you okay what happened "

    "ah Denise calm down it's just a cough" he said then coughed violently.

    "it's not a cough I know it isn't"

    "ah mi'ja don't cry"

    "how can I not,please don't go I need you please please grandaddy"

    "I'm not going anywhere I will never leave you"

    "grandaddy,......"

    I collapsed on the chair and just cried. I felt some one put there arms around me And I snuggled into them.

    I assumed it was my brother, but I felt them rub my back and knew it wasn't me brother.
    But honestly I didn't care at that point, I lifted my head and saw those sparkling hazel eyes.
    I realized I had been crying on Carter but I didn't care.

    I got up and walked out, I slid on the floor and leaned on the wall.
    I sat there trying to regulate my breathing.
    I saw carter walk out he sat next to me and took his sweater off. He handed it to me.

    "why are you giving me your sweater"

    "your still in a hospital gown and the back is open not That I was looking"

    "oh really I don't think your sweater is gonna cover it"I laughed but I just wanted him to take his shirt off.

    "fine here take my shirt"he said I saw him take his shirt off and saw how ripped he actually was.

    "thank you I mean it thanks any other dude would just leave I mean you barely know me and I've been going....."
    I stopped realizing I was talking to much.
    I put the shirt on and kept my mouth shut.

    "why'd you stop"

    "sorry I was talking to much"

    "I liked it , hey I'll tell your two of my secrets if you tell me two of yours"

    "deal you go first"

    "well my mom was a drugee and my aunt took me in your turn"

    "ok my dad was a abusive drunk I still have scars"I said looking at my knee where a white scar stayed.

    "ok this is gonna sound geeky but when I was little, I had this crayon box of swirled crayons like red and pink in the same crayon, well I had this hazel and brown crayon, it was my fav crayon and I didn't know why I wouldn't even use it afriad it lose it. To this day it's still in my room."he looked off as if remembering.
    "and now I know why it was my fav because your eyes turn brown to hazel and it just takes my breath away"

    I sat there staring at him not sure what to say.
    Before I could talk Sean came out and sat between us.
     
  6. #2
    carters pov
    I sat there staring at Sean anger easing in me.
    I wanted to hit him as hard as I could,just knock him out.
    But I saw the way she stared at him I couldn't.

    "I wanna go home Sean please get your mom"she said she got up.
    My shirt leaned on her it went up to about her mid-thighs.
    It made her look sexy the way she was, her hair was up in a messy bun.
    I loved when girls did that just loved it, her eyes were still puffy.

    I walked up to her she stared at my stomach.
    "to think of it I'm kinda cold can I have your sweater"

    I laughed "sure here now I have a question "

    "ask away whatever you want sexy"she giggled pointing at my abs.

    "when you starting school"

    "um this week why"

    "just want to know one more thing"

    "what"

    "I've been told I'm invisible"

    "really you seem pretty popular"

    "well can you see me"

    "of course I can See you silly"she said poking my stomach. She flinched but I went on.

    "ok how bout tomorrow at 7:00"
    I waited for her answer but she just stared at me.
    carters pov
    I sat there staring at Sean anger easing in me.
    I wanted to hit him as hard as I could,just knock him out.
    But I saw the way she stared at him I couldn't.

    "I wanna go home Sean please get your mom"she said she got up.
    My shirt leaned on her it went up to about her mid-thighs.
    It made her look sexy the way she was, her hair was up in a messy bun.
    I loved when girls did that just loved it, her eyes were still puffy.

    I walked up to her she stared at my stomach.
    "to think of it I'm kinda cold can I have your sweater"

    I laughed "sure here now I have a question "

    "ask away whatever you want sexy"she giggled pointing at my abs.

    "when you starting school"

    "um this week why"

    "just want to know one more thing"

    "what"

    "I've been told I'm invisible"

    "really you seem pretty popular"

    "well can you see me"

    "of course I can See you silly"she said poking my stomach. She flinched but I went on.

    "ok how bout tomorrow at 7:00"
    I waited for her answer but she just stared at me.
     
  7. #3
    denise pov
    I stared at him completely shocked but mostly pleased.
    He was hot and I wasn't gonna lie we were a cute couple.
    I decided to snap out of my love coma and get into reality.

    "I would love to and I know were I wanna go"

    "really and were is that"

    "well it's Dave and busters seems like a fun place"

    "awesome see you tommorow"he said smiling in triumph.

    I decided I might as well tease him I put my hand behind his head and kissed him.
    I walked off leaving him in awe, baby I was back rebound was my specialty.
    I wasnt gonna fall in love with him, his words were sweet.
    But I was being real love wasn't worth all the pain.
    I had been thru enough I didn't need anything else.
    But I didn't know why I wanted all his love I craved it.
    I hated being this way but I just was. I Wanted guys attention and love, at home I was ignored and cuz of that I craved it.
     
  8. #4
    Denise pov
    next day
    I sat there getting ready I didn't know what look to do but I figured it out.
    I was gonna do sexy casual, I wanted him drawn in.
    I had a pair of dark denim skinnys with a pair of pumps that were to die for.
    They were black and tall almost like a boot with spikes on the heel and tip.
    I was wearing a lacy gray blouse that flowed around.
    I did my hair up in a pony pinning my bangs up in a small bump it.
    I put clear gloss on and I was set baby.
    It was already 6:45 and I sat with my granddads dog.
    He was old and fragile,

    "oh champarito your the only guy I love"I cooed to him.

    He laid on his stomach and gave my a sloppy lick on my hand.

    "eww champarito that is nasty"I squealed.

    I walked to go wash my hand right as I did I heard the door open. I almost ran but remembered my heels.

    I didn't want to break my other arm let this one heal first.
    I saw a dark figure standing there,I walked to the cabinet and grabbed a knife.
    I wasn't letting anybody hurt me again never ever.
    I was shaking with courage and rage I felt tears come to my eyes.
    I stared at the person,all I knew was that it wasn't Carter.

    He was to built and the guy wasn't muscular enough.
    I was about to swing when the guy turned and I saw those blue eyes.
    I dropped then knife and threw my arms around Camerons neck relieved but anger filled me.
    "why and the he'll would you sneak up on me I almost stabbed you"

    "god didn't know I was gonna get death threats"

    I hit his arm as hard as I could I picked up the knife and threw it on the counter.

    He stared at me smiling , I smiled and turned around.
    "you likey I'm going on a date with that Carter guy"

    "CARTER what do you mean CARTER?!?!"he shouted at me.

    "I mean Carter he asked me out I said yes not that big"

    "Carter Is a womanizer who has a different girl each week he doesn't even know there name"

    "I don't give a $hit I'm a man eater it's just a date trust me I ain't getting hurt, if anyone getting hurt it's gonna be him"I said snapping my fingers.

    "he's adams best friend"he said.

    Right as he did a car honked and Camerons eyes flared bloodthirsty.
     
  9. #5

    Cameron pov
    I stood there anger filling me.
    I felt cheated like someone just slapped me.
    We had a connection and she dated Carter. She dated CARTER,I was Gonna hit him as hard as I could.

    I was gonna make him wish he never saw my lil bunny.
    She was mine,mine I elfin tell you.
    I heard the car beep and I burst out Denise yelling behind me.

    Carter came out shocked to see me,I grabbed the collar of his shirt.
    I lifted my fist to punch but someone grabbed it.

    I swung behind me to push them away. I heard her scream her beautiful scream fill my ears.

    I turned to see her tears flowing down her face. Blood trickled down her nose.

    What shocked me was the hate In her eyes. She launched herself at me, and tackled me down.

    She hit and hit finally Carter lifted her off me.

    "I am NOT your bitch you don't just hit me. Don't ever put your hands on me"she screamed.

    I saw Carter wipe her nose and tears away.

    She got in the car and I watched her drive away.

    The girl I loved hated me she just hated me. And I deserved it all I deserved it all.
     
  10. #6
    dennys pov
    I sat in the booth with Carter,I heard him talk but I wasn't listening.
    My mind was on Cameron how could he hit me like that.
    Someone tapped on my shoulder and took me out of my train of thought.
    Carter sat in front of me clearly irritated.

    I saw the waiter in front of us staring at me flirtatiously.
    Puh-lease as if he was tall and about a year older than me.

    He had brown hair in a skater boy look.
    His face was surprisingly clear, he had big brown eyes.
    "what can I get ya"he said

    "whatever he's getting"

    "ok be right back"

    I watched him leave and put a innocent face on. I tried to look somewhat scared.

    "sorry it's just my grandaddy I'm just worried is all,oh I ruined the date"
    I said with fake sadness I hoped he fell for it.

    It would be awkward of him catching me think bout another guy.

    He stared at me with sympathy,he grabbed my hand and kissed and gave me a sly smile.

    "you could never ruin anything being that cute"

    "ah your sweet,hey I'll brb"

    "kk I'll just wait here for you"

    I waved flirty and walked off my phone was vibrating like crazy.

    I flipped it open and saw a text from my brother Adam and Sean.
    What no apology from that deausche Cameron.