hunting dawn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Nov 11, 2011.

  1. Budjxjjdd




    Bumpplz read my story called "freedom!"
     
  2. BUMP!! More 
     
  3. This is amazingggg!!! Thanks for taking my advice:)
     
  4. Bump for everyone
     
  5. Oh... (Un)Holy... S***...
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    Salrion's POV

    "Look, we have to do something about those demons, to many people around here are dying. It's been all over the news." Jareth said crossing his arms looking between Justin and I.
    "Jareth I understand you are concerned for the girls, I am to, but we can't just barge in and shoot Elijah in the face." Justin said staring blankly at the wall.
    "Why not, it will be doing Em a favor." Jareth said heatedly.
    I winced at the mention of my loves name.
    I now knew why Emma would give me a chance, I messed up big, not only did I throw away her trust, but also lost her heart.
    To that demon.
    Anger and jealous sparkled in me, and my body began to convulse.
    I would kill that monster, and win back my Em, no matter what the price.
    "Salrion, be calm please, there is nothing we can do about Emma's feelings." Justin said with a sad look at me.
    I growled looking away from both of them.
    "If Em, has feelings for that beast she will try getting closer to it, I'm not letting it happen, I'm attacking tonight, with or without you." I said coldly and stood up walking outside and into the night.

    Elijah's POV

    "So what are we going to do tonight, kill the last human, and go out to party as a celebration?" Farah asked smirking.
    I struggled to remain calm at her words.
    "No, I'm tired tonight, that last soul I drained seemed a bit off." I muttered and looked to Nancy.
    "Who was that girl any way, how did you get her to meet me?" I wondered.
    "That was Kristine Winters, she used to bully me when I was still going to school." Nancy said looking down in sadness.
    "Ahh, then I guess you got your justice." I snickered, flipping down on the couch.
    She didn't say anything, just stared at the ground, with a sad expression.
    Chris was by her side in seconds with his hand on her shoulder.
    "Are you ok?" He asked, concern clear in his eyes.
    Miranda watched this looking pained, hurt, and almost betrayed, before turning and walking out of the room slamming the door shut.
    Nancy looked between Chris and Miranda.
    "I'm sorry if I'm causing you two troubles, I can't do anything right." Nancy said tears filling her eyes as she stands up and runs into my room, shutting the closet door.
    Chris sat there looking torn, and then looking up at me, Farah, and Emmanuel.
    "A little help?" He muttered.
    "Forget that, I'm not so wise when it comes to love crap." I said turning away with a glare to stare out the window.
    "Help with what, go talk to Miranda, you upset her, you love her, and you know you aren't allowed to play around with humans, I'll tell my father if you do." Farah warns with a dark glare.
    Emmanuel just stayed quiet and watched her.
    If anyone gave him better advice that little bit*h would run off and tell her daddy on us, little witch.
    I turned to watch the TV, indifferent.
    Then suddenly I smelt something. It was an unbearable earthy smell, no doubt in my mind it was the mutts.
    I guess tonight was the night. 

    Bump
    -----massive battle in next update

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  7. GASP!!! 
    Is it gonna be a "fight"?
    Or an all out FIGHT?! 
     
  8. Ohhh, will I be involved? Because this is AWESOME!!! 
     
  9. Merry christmasalmost bump
     
  10. Oh yeah,a fight 
     
  11. Please wall me for updates
    BUMP
     
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    Does anyone know were Kristine will fit in this story? The first person to get this right will be sent a private PM, and a gift. 

    Update will be- December 21st or 22nd

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  13. But Kristine's soul is already taken by Elijah right? 
     
  14. -her soul's energy was taken and replaced with evil energy-