hunting dawn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Nov 11, 2011.

  1. Thank you so much 
     
  2. C. A complicated love triangle(Elijah loves Emma,Salrion loves Emma,Emma doesn't know who to love )
    Then in the end...
    A. Elijah with Emma(Happy Ending!!)
     
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    Elijah's POV


    My eyes narrowed into slits as I eyed my target. Moving with the swiftness of a tiger, I ran full force in her direction, with my knife held high above my head.
    My hand came down on her shoulder pushing her into the cement wall, and slowly stabbing her in harsh movements up her spine.
    Her wild screams were quickly choked off by mouthfuls of blood spilling over her lips.
    With the final stab to the head I smirked letting her dead body slide down the wall of the alley.
    Leaning over her body I quickly slashed Fang info her stomach.
    I didn't know who this girl was, but I couldn't care less, I had more important thinks to worry about.
    I glanced down as a burning sensation began up my arms, showing the bands of tattoos marking up my arms.
    Never to be seen by anyone unless Satan was summoning me.
    I held back a wince as the tattoos burned and glowed bright red as fire.
    --Elijah, come to me--
    I heard his sinister voice ring out.
    I reluctantly nodded, turning to quickly get out if the alley.
    --I'll be right there.-- I thought to him.
    Making my way through the streets I tried not to bring any attention to myself.
    If Satan wanted to see me.. Something has to be wrong..did he find out about Emma.

    Emma's POV

    I couldn't believe my eyes. On my way home from the library I had noticed Elijah following a girl back into the alley.
    This bothered me a bit for a reason unknown, so I stuck around and watched.
    He was like an animal, a beset. There was no way a Hunan could have such strength, and those glowing tattoos?
    Elijah Fang was not a normal guy, he was a murderer.
    I should have called the police, I should have told someone about this, but I couldn't.
    I just couldn't.
    But I had to do something..
    First I need to find out what he is, then how to deal with him.
    He isn't human, he was something dark, something bad.
    Yet at the same time something good. I felt like Elijah is so much more then just a tempted boy.

    Bumps?

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  4. That is a very good update
     
  5. oh meh gash she found out about him!!!  suspense!
    Bump 
     
  6. Sensualpie, why is it taking long for the update on Invisible? I'm like your number one fan!! 
     
  7. Lmao I'm busy with BOTI! Invisible was technically paused until I got more of an idea. Sowwy 
     
  8. It's okay! No apology needed! 
     
  9.  Yay! I feel forgiven!
     
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    Elijah's POV


    The next morning I was angered to find Farah in my shower, and Chris in the kitchen, and Miranda blaring music in the living room.
    I cant stand this.
    I growled, trying to ignore them all, the last thing I wanted was to be bothered by them.
    Before I left just to get out of the house Nancy stopped me.
    "I'm ready for you to feed off me.." She said with a brave looking expression.
    I rolled my eyes, thinking a bit.
    "To tell you the truth I'm full from my last kill, but I'll get to you later." I smirked, and walked past her and out the door.
    I sighed taking my time to get to school today. I wasn't looking forward to meeting up with Emma. How was I going to explain myself for that kiss, she can't know the truth.

     Chris's POV

    I watched as Elijah left, and glanced to Nancy. She sighed looking down at the ground as she walked back towards Elijah's closet.
    "Hey, Nancy is it?" I asked calling out to her.
    She turned looking at me with a expression that said she didn't fear me at all as much as Elijah.
    "What?" She said turning to look at me.
    "Why don't you stay out here, and watch some movies or something?" I asked patting the couch.
    Miranda narrowed her eyes looking between us.
    Nancy looked like she was thinking this over and came back to the couch sitting down.
    "Wont Elijah get mad?" She asked, fiddling with hair as she looked at me.
    "Nah, Elijah may put up this bad guy act up pretty good, and play the part right, but deep down he isn't a killer." I said with a small smile.
    Nancy looked doubtful at me.
    "Way, way, way down deep inside him maybe." She said cracking a smile.
    "But if anyone would ever find that out he would be killed, and tortured down in the lowest level of hell, so if you know what's good for you, you'll keep your mouth shut." Miranda snapped at her with a glare.
    I wrapped my arm around Miranda's waist.
    "Calm down babe, I got this." I said and looked back to Nancy sheepishly.
    Now a look of fear was back on her face, I reached out to touch her shoulder, looking in her eyes.
    "It will be ok." I said seriously.
    For some strange reason I had this feeling inside me, this girl would not die, and I'd make sure of it.
    Miranda growled and ripped us both to the door in a huff.
    "We are out of here." She snapped and pulled us out the door, and out to go to school.
    Hmm, I'm feeling some jealousy bubbling up around here, better be careful, fraternizing with humans is against the rules. Couldn't let myself get to cozy.

    Farah's POV

    As I finished my hair I walked out to see that girl Elijah had trapped in this house. What a torture this must be, it's wonderful.
    I walked over to her smirking.
    "Enjoying your morning, young girl." I said with a sneer.
    "Actually yes, and my name is Nancy..." She said glancing at me.
    She must not know who she is talking to.
    I grabbed her face with my hands, digging in my sharp nails into her face, letting blood run down her face.
    "It's very unwise to not fear me, I am after all more powerful then Elijah." I growled.
    Nancy yelped, crying in pain.
    I slowly let go of her face from my claws.
    "I'm watching you." I warned darkly. "I can feel what your feeling for Chris. It's against the rules and if this continues I'll kill you both." I snapped and turned on my heel, walking out the door, and with a sniff to the air I found Elijah's scent and followed it.
    Here I come.

    Bump? What do you think of these crazy characters? Who are your favorites?

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  11. Elijah and nancy
     
  12. Bumpity Bump Bump!!!!
     
  13. Taylor is my favorite!!!!!  even tho she is in only one seen
     
  14. In the off topics I have made a club! All you are invited to join in lol if you want!

    thank you