DayBreak

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Mar 3, 2013.

  1. Snowy is a reserved nickname that only I can use 
     
  2.  Hawk is running! *Sits on Falc so he can't get up*
     
  3. Waiting for next chapter 
     
  4. Will you wait you can read me and Sky's story 
     
  5. Nice, Jack.
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  6. Ahhhh I'm in it yay haha only read the first page soooooooo yea haha
     
  7.  The suspense is killing me..
     
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    -Jack House 3:45pm-
    I knocked on Jack house door and waited for about 15 minutes before he finally let me in. " what took you so long Jackie?" I look at him with a serious face. " this job stinks, I'm suppose to spy on a school teacher and she doesn't even realize it," he told. " you could have some fun with her if you know what I mean." I said to him laughing. He started to laugh the same time I did but then try to hit me on the face which I quickly dodged and put in the arm breaker submission hold. " I give, I give, don't break my arm," I let him go as he grabbed hold of his arm. " you're lucky you have to spy on a 16 year while I have to spy on a woman who is already married," he told me. " don't complain, the girl I'm spying on is gonna make it hard for me to befriend her when she always ask me question I don't know how to answer," I looked down when I told him. " I know you Zero, that's not you, I think you may have a crush on her," I jumped up in anger " never," I yelled as I walked out of his house.
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    -Zero House-
    I punched the punching bag hard enough that it made it spin. " Z, Raven is here with Annabelle," I stopped right on track when dad said that. " let them in," I yelled out as I kicked the punching bag three times hard enough for it to hit me back on my face. " 0.0 that hurt," I said as I rubbed my face with a towel as Annabelle and Raven came down to where I was at. " may I help you two?" I asked them as I put on my shirt back. I looked at both Raven and Annabelle and saw both of them staring off into space. " I came to apologize for asking inappropriate questions," Annabelle said looking at me with guilt on her face. " I was adopted by my mom B right after my parents where burned to death right at the time when I was only 3 weeks old, back then I still didn't have a name yet but the one who have me the name was my grandfather my father dad who saw me as demonic and blamed me for their death, honestly since I was still a kid I didn't know why I was given that name until mom B told me that." I explained to Annabelle fixing my hair on the mirror. " must have been hard when you found out," she sounded sad when she said which made me laugh. " I love this name, because it makes me different from others." I grabbed a water bottle and started drinking it. I look as Raven and Annabelle look at the watch on the wall. " we gotta go," they both said as they left. I went to my room and later on my bed until I fell asleep.
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    sorry for the wait
     
  9. Ahhhh I read all of it now and I'm in it again as Snow my character haha yayyyyy you made her shy like snow lol
     
  10. Snow is Snow White
    Raven is Accidentally
    Jack is Jack
    Jennet is Jennete to put it all together
     
  11. What about moi? 
    Jk. 
     
  12. More characters will appear later on the story so just wait
     
  13. Yayyyy I'm still in it haha awesome I've never had my name in a story before
     
  14.  Love it! When's the next update?