(yes, english is not my first lauege. Plus my spell cheack is not too good. Still that dos not mean i cant do this. And sometimes, my finger slips cuz im writing this on my ipod. So please dont hate my story. It hurts me)
Ch 3: A Sufferer's blood Yoru's pov : Okay, so im supose to find someone that has suffered real pain. That is not easy! People this days just are too proud to feel it. I walked down the streets. Its dark already, and too quiet. The sound of a wipp and a scream gat my attancon! (comments plz)
Yoru's pov : As i gat to the scene I cud clearly hear the sound of the wipp and a man scream. Jugeing by the voice, he cant be more then 20 years old. When i gat there I kicked the person that had the wipp. He fall down and looked up at me pissed. I gave him my Ice demon look as a "Go to hell" sign. He gat sceard and he and his friends took off. I looked at the wonded man. He is alive, good. I gat over to him to nurs his wonds.
The suffering man's pov : As i woke up i feld like my body was brused open. But someone had nurst me well. It dident sting or hurt too much and i feld relaxed. A young boy came in. "Good to see that you are well." he said softly. I nobbed and gave a weak smile.
2 hours later. Yoru's pov : "Holy red full moon! You really went thro all that?" I asked suprised. (haha, im stoping here cuz im tierd. Will update soon)
(its okay, and thx. I know its a bit flatt but its my first story after all. Okay, btw: im going on hollyday, and im not sure if its net there, so i will be gone for 7 days. No update unless its net there)
The sufferer pov : "All my life have i been in war. My mother, wife and son was killed in the worst way posebil, even tho thy had done nothing.." the man looked down. "I see. Im sorry to hear that." yoru putted his head over to his left sholder. "you have suffered great." the man nobbed. "Im not trying to be creepy, but can i get some of your blood?"