Yoru's POV : I gat up later that night. Hikaru was already waiting for me at our room. I knew what he wanted. As we layd there naked, feeling each others skin. Hearing eachothers breath. The sound of virgen fleash that gets pressed gentely open and Hikaru moaning in a mix of pain and pleasure. After that it all went so fast that i cudent think too clearly. When it was over i sat down in the window, smoking my cigaret as i always do after sex. Leting Hikaru sleep. 1000 thods ran thro my head. Mary is back and already pissed. Mary's POV: Why? She was loved and blessed. Im not. My sisther had the beauty of a godess and the talent of a master. And what do i have? Nothing... Not am i pretty. I have no good talents or skills. I have ugly green hair and gry eyes. If i only had my sisthers beauty. She had a shinning color of blue to hair and beauteful green eyes. Her face and body was perfect. And to think that papa wanted her to be the next on the thrown even when i was the oldest. But now i have the mirror of Lusifer. Soon i will suck out my sisthers beauty and become the prettyest in the land. All shall be mine!!!! (comments plz)
Hikaru's POV: I woke up by the morning sun. My back was stiffed and my head aired. But all good so far.
(very good even with the few spelling errors it's a very captivating story that one just wants to keep reading -the dark critic-)
Agi's POV Srsly last night i swear i heard someone moan loudly. And that someone was hikaru. Now, im not gonna say anything. Its sweet and speceil. But i have to say i never thod thos two were gay. But hei, its okay. I gat up that morning to help the maid make breakfast. Yoru and hikaru came down not long after it was done. Maria on the other hand was not in the casle for the moment. Im sure its work again. When i was about to clean up i said to the boys. " next time, be more quiet." thy both went red in thier cheeks. I smirked and started to clean up.
(i have been gone a week but im back now.) Agi's pov: I held my breath as i lat Maria tattoo the holy spell on my left leg. I cursed and made painded sounds. Hikaru held my hand, suprizely. But it feeld calming. I breathed out when she was done. "Now, her poison cant work on you.." maria said.
umm... Coz of the me and Kris thing you said "If you hurt him I'll hurt you." I never meant to hurt him just know that Hon :3
Hikaru's pov : I must say, Agi is one tuff cookie. Not only can she stand the pain of being tattooed, but also can she fight. Just watching her and Yoru treand togheter is awsome. Holy moon, she looks like a wild cat. And i love it. Yoru is so gentel, even when he fights. I have to laught. He is so sweet and she so wild. How awsome.
Hmmmmm... Add a bit more action and maybe a tad of romance or a sexual scene (Don't go into detail about it though!)