tears of poisen 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *black-crimson (01), Jun 17, 2012.

  1. (all charekters told so far are girls. U have the me person whic i somewhere told the name to. The assasin called maria is a female. And mary the evil sisther)
     
  2. "Arina.."
    I jumped alittel as the assasin calld my name. She had a soft look in her eyes but no smile.
    ".... I know how it is to have a older sibling hateing you... My older brother hated me so much, he nearly killed me with his own hands.." I looked suprised at her. ".. Why dident your parents stop him?" i asked. She fall silent for a minite.
    "Its becuze of him that thy both gat hanged by the gallows.."
    I cudent belive it. Why? Why wud a son kill his own parents?
     
  3. (im back)
    The assassin never anserd the question Why, but i guess she cant really anser it.
     
  4. I pulld my cap on and looked at the assassin that was in full "armor"
    Kinda... She nob and we walked out. She helped me on the hours and self gat on behind me. She took the streams and yelled to the hours.
     
  5. As the hours run thro the area my heart beated hard in chest. I panted loud cuz i was sceard. The assasssin was all calm... The hell? How can she be so calm? We are riding fast and really hard thro this place.... Oh dear... Im gonna be sick.
     
  6. When the horse finelly stoped I lean to its neck and almost laughted in exsostion. The assassin gat down and looked up. I took a deep breath before looking up.... A casle....
     
  7. "you gatta be kidding me" I said. She laughts and helped me down. We walked up and she knocked on the door. My heart beated so hard that im sure the female assassin can hear it.
     
  8. still a few not many spelling mistakes im just pointing out so dont get cross at me..
     
  9. (its okay. But i wud like comments of my story)
     
  10. its good keep going
     
  11. I really like it so far
     
  12. (thx)

    She smirked as the door open. A young maiden open the door. She smiled warm to us. "come in, and welcome back Maria. We missed you."
    The place was warm and elegant. I tryd to smile but failed. The assassin laught warmly and satt down.
     
  13. "what now?" i asked.
    "we need to plan how to kill your sisther. Its not everyday you gat to kill one of the queens friends. Its gonna rain of her wrath." somehow that sounded like a joke but it wasent. Thy really wanted to kill her.
     
  14. shockedbump need to learn more bump!!!
     
  15. Misspelled a wordI meant you should bump a lot.
     
  16. Not learn cause you already know how to bump just... Ok imma gonna stop explaining my self cause it can go on forever I just you should bump again fast. Sorry for the misspelled word
     
  17. (i dobt really know what Bump is but whatever..)