Striving 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Jul 15, 2012.

  1. TOXIC!!!! You're correct! I really do like Adam
     
  2. That is key, my good friend.
     
  3. Nothing,now let's update! Lol
     
  4. Yes... Let's update. 
     
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    As she entered the main bedroom of the castle, she saw her mother there, her eyes swollen from tears, and her face completely messed up, from the inside out.

    Amanda's mother looked like she was burned to death, but her mother croaked, trying to ease Amanda as gentle she could be,"Come here, my diamond."

    Diamond was the name of Amanda's nickname to her mother. Everyday her mother told her when she was little, and Amanda had nightmares of her family gone, her mother would kiss her forehead and tell her the wondrous feeling she had seeing you for the first time. She described Amanda as a goddess, which pleased her to sleep every time. But in bad conditions, she would hum the lullaby to Amanda;

    From life beyond, the eyes are closing, and the fear of the night flies away. May you rest your delicate head, and get cozy in your bed, and tell me your troubles aren't here to stay.
    You are a complete wonder, a delight enchanted, an I weep every time you sued a tear. But when your rest again, you make the bad dreams blunder, and im glad you give me no fear.
    So hush my dear, and calm yourself, because life is crazy outside, but without you in my life, I've lost my pride, and you cause me to fall in tears
    Sleep one...it's not so bright, I tuck you in, and spell goodnight.

    It would am instant make her feel loved and cherished, but from the way her mother was, she was timid.

    As Amanda stiffly sat on the side of her mothers bed, her mother took her hand, and squeezed it softly,"How are you, my wonderful gem?"

    Amanda's heart sunk. Her mother was caring about her own safety and not hers, she pitied.

    "I'm...fine."Amanda said, unsure.

    "I'm sorry for troubling you to come here."her mother said, rubbing her inflated stomach.

    "Mother....it's alright, I'm quite glad to see you well."Amanda said, wanting her mother to smile.

    Her mother chuckled,"Well, I have quite a mission for you, my daughter."

    A mission?

    Amanda stood there, her lips curving.

    How delightful to Amanda.
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  6. WOO HOOO!!!!! I got a mission!!!!!
     
  7. I shall update tomorrow guys, I have more stories on the way! So get ready! The dedications might be to....YOU.
     
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    "What do you have in mind mother?"Amanda asked, suddenly curious of why her mother would make her go outside the walls.

    Her mother huffed, promptly,"I am in need of assistance to find out who suddenly started attacking everyone is the land. Though it was only an instant, I believe that the culprit may inherit so much more leasing."

    Amanda thought of that.
    Culprit? In a short amount of time?
    This was gonna be heavy.

    Amanda bowed to her mother, signaling her that she accepted and her mother let go of her hand and said,"Here my precious."

    There in her mothers hand contained a little jeweled box, designed to carry something valuable.

    Amanda wanted to know what was in the box.

    Her mother opened the box and it concealed a diamond necklace, a big one. But it wasn't really a diamond. It was the color of a stormy gray. Amanda held it to her, and examined it closely.

    "I know what your thinking, what is this gem?"her mother smirked.
    Amanda looked at her with hopeful eyes of understanding.

    Her mother sighed, because of the pain in her belly,"This is the Phersephone Diamond. The knights were able to get it from the culprit's bag, and it is increasingly valuable!"

    Amanda just stared at her mother.......the Phersephone Diamond?What does it do?

    Amanda was frightened,"Mother."she said in a raspy voice,"Isn't this cursed or whatnot?"

    Her mother took the necklace and cup her hands in Amanda's.

    But her mother just winked in stress,"There is much to the story. Now go! You have a mission my sweet."Her mother kissed her forehead and Amanda headed out of the doorway.

    When the guards saw her leave, the primevally went to follow her, but Amanda's mothers hand raised up to the guards, and her velvet voice cams once again,"Let her be. It's time."

    Amanda headed up the brink of the castle and stared out into a balcony.
    The view of the ocean calmed her, and she couldn't bear to part for it again.

    On second thought, Amanda said to herself. Let's be free.

    And she left her body go off of the balcony, her eyes closed and her lips twisting into a smile.
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  9. Did I just jump off a balcony?
     
  10. Yes, Amanda, you did.
     
  11. I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!!
     
  12. I BELIEVE I CAN TOUCH THE SKY!
     
  13. I forgot the other words lok
     
  14. I remember when you posted on my story"It's so good makes me wanna throw mine on the ground." well I could say the same. Nice job
     
  15. .....I think I just got slapped by my own words.