No keep it going. I just started reading this yesterday and it is amazing and it keeps you on edge about what will happen next.
here's a kinda short update... next one coming soon ****Zachs POV**** We all stared at the door. May looked angry that her front door was broken and Karl looked confused. It was already dark out. We couldn't tell who it was till they came in. "Where the hell is my niece?!" Yuki screamed We all side. I can see that May was relieved that it was Yuki but mad her door was broken. "Yuki you owe me a new door." May said "Oopsy.... sorry May." Yuki said picking up the door. I forgot i had Aly on the phone. So i quickly got up and walked out to te porch letting them talk inside. "Aly. We need a trace on Therese." I said "Therese? why? what happened?" Aly replied worried "My father abducted her from preschool. We need to find them and quick." I told her "Ok. Ok ill have a trace on her by tomorrow after noon." Aly said "It can't be sooner?!" I replied alittle loud "Zach i can try. But I doubt i can. Dont worry though ill have a trace soon." She told me We said good bye and hung up. I walked inside and told May. She looked a little sick. I get bad for my sister. "Its ok May. We'll get her back"I said. "Babe dont worry we will find her. I will bring her home to us." Karl added in. We all hugged her. But she jumped up grabbed her phone ran out the door and jumped into her car and sped off. I could tell what she was gonna do. She had fury in her eyes. She was out to get he daughter back.
oh my! another update!! ****Therese POV**** I was sitting in the backseat of some van. I didnt know where I was going. I didnt know the man driving. He said he was my grandpa. "Gwandpa. where we going?" I asked "Somewhere. Now shut up." He growled "sowwy." I replied I shot me a look of anger. I was terrified. Was he going to hurt me? I was so scared. I began to cry. "Stop that non sense right now!" He yelled I began to cry even more. Trying to stop was really hard. I wanted to go home. "I want my mommy and daddy you meanie!" I yelled at him "Well you won't see your mommy! NOW SHUT YOUR DAMN MOUTH CHILD!" He said as he reached over and slapped me I quickly hushed up holding my mouth closed so i wont scream out in pain. I felt my tears roll down my cheek. After 5 more minutes in the car we stopped at this abandoned home. I was horrified when he dragged me out of the van. I tried to resist but that just made him angry. I seen him raise his hand at me. Then my vision went black. NO HE DID NOT TOUCH MY DAUGHTER OH HEEEEELLLLL NAW!