Picking Up The Pieces

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Jan 13, 2012.

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    "I said move." His voice was velvet and inviting.

    Tucker stood and confronted him.
    " Who are you to her anyways?"

    "Her Fiance'."

    "WHAT?" Tucker gasped and stared at me. I only shrugged my shoulders.

    "Now. Go. I never want to see you all over her like that again. I mean never, so get the f-ck outta here Timmy."

    "Its Tucker." He scoffed.

    "Todd. Go away before I kick your a$$."

    Tucker yeled and swung the first punch, but landed a swift kick in the 'nuts'.

    He grunted and fell to his knees, as my fiancé grabbed his wrist and cracked it, I cringed at the sound.

    "Let me tell you something b-tch. I am your worst nightmare. Touch her again. I f-cking dare you, and you'll be the one I murder. I won't fail like last time either." He whispered low and hostile, couldn't make out what he said.

    With one last attempt, Tucker screamed to me "DONT TRUST HIM!!!! HE K--!!!"

    He was kicked in the head. I gasped and tried to comprehend the situation.

    "But- he was-" I whimpered.

    "Shut the f-ck up Jenna. I'm helping you and you'll appreciate it. Now f-cking come here." My fiancé screamed.

    I was shaking like crazy... My legs wobbled as his eyes violently gripped into mine.

    He pulled me into a hug. And squeezed my hair way too tight.

    I whimpered.

    "Tell me you love me, Jenna..," His voice was psychotic.

    "I-I love you..." I cried.

    With that, he picked me up and carried me out the door.

    I was placed in his truck, and we quickly drove away, leaving the small suburbian house, slowly vanishing in the distance, behind us.

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  3. bump!!!!
     
  4. OMG JENNA UPDATE LIKE IMMEDIATELY
     
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  6. OMG Dis Jacob Turn Bad? 
     
  7. Omg bump!! 
     
  8. Please update ASAP!!
     
  9. Lol this man isnt Jacib, Its.. Another man
     
  10. I'm sorry my brain crawled out my ear in search of the correct word to use for this. So I have no reply.... Just update PLEASE0.0
     
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    Jacob's POV

    I walked along the sidewalk only a few more blocks from my Jenna.

    I was anxious and hoped she was awake, for I had bought her a dozen of her favorite flower; white roses.

    I was rushing up along the side of the road when-

    -UMMMPHH-

    She fell onto the sidewalk and looked up at me. She wasn't a day over 19. She looked young, and was rather attractive. I helped her up, and smiled apologeticly.

    "Here, take this. I'm really sorry." I handed her a single white rose.

    She smiled wide as she took it in hand. "You really shouldn't. You're wife will miss it."

    "Oh no! I'm not married!" I laughed.

    She had peircing green eyes and red hair. Little freckles surrounded her nose and she had the softest dimples.

    "Uhhmm... I should probably get going.." She muttered.

    "Well let me make this up you- Over dinner?" I inquired.

    "Thatd be lovely!" She smiled.

    "Vòn Puerś Italian. 7pm." I smiled.

    "Ill be there!" She giggled.

    "See you then."

    "Okayy!" She pranced away smelling her white rose, and showing her cute demples.

    I smiled wide as she disappeared down the street, into the moonlight night.

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  12. bump!!!!!! 