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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Adele-QueenOfBread, Nov 22, 2011.
-wonders to herself am I falling I. Love with a mortal?-
"Wait a damn minute!" -She brushes her hair and opens the door-
"It's 11:16. Do you need to be somewhere?" I ask
"No. I like staying here."
I like this cottage I leave it here -wLks aWay-
"Well, okay." I smile and put the phone back in his pocket.
-He plays with her hair-
"Are you obsessed with my hair?" I giggle
-I smile sitting beside her- "Hello Alida."
-feels bad about what happen but it can't continue from where they stop-
"Well its soft..."
Alida: *smiles* hey Sal!
"How are you?"
-spread her wings and flys away continuing her search for her lost brother-
Alida: I'm wonderful now that your here. *blushes*
I blush and gently grab a strand of Deven's hair. "Your's is soft too..."
-I smile and place my hand on hers- "As am I."
(cross out the apostrophe in yours... wtf was I thinking?! )
-He laughs-
Alida: *strokes his hands watching up at him* tell me what's on your mind