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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cresent9599, Jun 19, 2012.
Elisabeth:also hears the scream and runs after William, tapping him on the shoulder
Evelyn: -tears roll down my face as the men run-
Williamunches the men and knocks them out-
-walks over to the the bruised girl and cradles her in her arms- there, there love! It's alright.
Evelyn: -wipes eyes, sees a handsome man beating the perverted men up.-
Elisabeth: *pulls Evelyn to me and hugs her tight* I'm so sorry are you alright?
Evelyn: I-I-I'm s-s-sorry t-t-to bother you I say stuttering
William:-walks to Evelyn- are u ok?
Elisabetharling, they were trying to rape you! It's no trouble at all
Elisabeth: *smiles at William and mouths Thank you*
Evelyn: -wipes eye- I-I-I'm fine -thank you- -tear falls, wipes it away quickly-
William:-smiles back- your welcome
(Max are William and Elisabeth already having an affair or…not?)
(I think so)
Evelyn: -hugs the man- thank you -says gratefully- -her head is in his chest-
(hey! No secret messages lol jk )
Karla: well that's that.. Why are you sitting here like that anyways?
William:your welcome-hugs her slightly-
Evelyn: -looks at the women- me?
Elisabeth: *narrows my eyes from behind Evelyn slightly, then let's them soften slowly*